IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree) · General Training

The rise of a cashless society: advantages and disadvantages

The question

What are the advantages and disadvantages of a cashless society?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
While a digital economy offers significant improvements in convenience and financial transparency, the risks related to technical exclusion and privacy warrant careful consideration.
Paragraph 2:
Digital payments streamline commercial transactions by eliminating the physical burden of cash and reducing the costs associated with handling currency.
Paragraph 3:
The transition to a cashless system risks marginalising vulnerable populations who lack digital literacy or access to the necessary infrastructure.
  1. State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
  2. Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
  3. A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.

Band 8 sample essay

The rapid global transition towards digital payment systems has sparked a debate regarding the viability of a society that entirely abandons physical currency. While this shift facilitates more efficient economic interactions, it also introduces systemic vulnerabilities that cannot be ignored. This essay will evaluate the benefits of increased financial oversight against the potential for social exclusion.

Digital payments streamline commercial transactions by eliminating the physical burden of cash and reducing the costs associated with handling currency. By digitising every transaction, governments can effectively monitor money flows, which significantly enhances transparency and assists in curbing illicit activities such as tax evasion and money laundering. For instance, in nations like Sweden, the widespread adoption of mobile payment platforms has drastically reduced the opportunities for shadow economy operations, as almost all financial exchanges leave a clear, traceable electronic footprint.

Conversely, the transition to a cashless system risks marginalising vulnerable populations who lack digital literacy or access to the necessary infrastructure. Relying exclusively on electronic systems creates a dangerous dependency on technology; a single network outage or cyberattack could paralyse an entire nation’s economic activity. For example, when major banking software failures occur, individuals without access to traditional cash are often left unable to purchase basic necessities like food or medicine, highlighting the precarious nature of a purely digital ecosystem.

In summary, although moving away from cash promotes greater efficiency and security in the financial sector, the potential for systemic instability and social inequality remains a substantial concern. A balanced approach, where digital convenience is supported by robust safeguards for those unable to access technology, is essential to ensure that progress does not come at the cost of societal inclusivity.

276 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a formal academic tone and providing a balanced, well-developed argument with specific examples. A Band 6 response often fails to address both sides of the prompt equally or relies on repetitive, simplistic vocabulary and clichéd transitional phrases.

Vocabulary from the essay

viability
The ability to work successfully or survive long-term
illicit
Activities that are forbidden by law or custom
shadow economy
Economic activity that is unrecorded and untaxed
marginalising
Treating a person or group as insignificant
paralyse
To cause a total stoppage of normal activity
precarious
Not securely held in position or dangerously unstable
inclusivity
The practice of providing equal access to opportunities
systemic
Relating to a system as a whole entity

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "The rise of a cashless society: advantages and disadvantages"?

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 276 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a formal academic tone and providing a balanced, well-developed argument with specific examples. A Band 6 response often fails to address both sides of the prompt equally or relies on repetitive, simplistic vocabulary and clichéd transitional phrases.

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