Advising a friend on choosing employment over college
You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he /she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Sam,
It was great to hear from you! I’ve been thinking a lot about your dilemma regarding whether to head to college or jump straight into the workforce, and I wanted to share my perspective.
Honestly, I don’t think university would be the best fit for you right now. You’ve always been someone who thrives on hands-on activity rather than sitting through endless theory-heavy lectures. I recall how bored you were during our school seminars; a degree program would likely feel just as stifling and disconnected from your practical strengths.
Getting a job now seems like a much smarter move. You would start gaining financial independence immediately, which I know is a priority for you, and you’d build a professional network far sooner than your peers. Gaining real-world experience will give you a competitive edge that a classroom simply cannot replicate.
Given your talent for problem-solving and your interest in technology, I think you should look into roles in IT support or digital marketing internships. These fields value skills over formal qualifications and would allow you to learn on the job.
Let me know what you decide. I’m happy to help you polish your CV!
Best wishes,
Alex
199 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
This response achieves Band 8 by addressing all three bullet points with a natural, consistent informal tone and specific, relevant suggestions. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide specific job examples or using an overly formal tone that contradicts the relationship with the friend.
- Write to a friend or relative by first name and close with Best wishes, Love or See you soon.
- Contractions, phrasal verbs and a warm opening line are expected; a stiff formal tone loses marks here.
- Still cover every bullet in its own paragraph; friendly does not mean unstructured.
Useful phrases from the letter
- dilemma
- a difficult situation where a choice must be made
- thrives
- to grow or develop well in specific conditions
- stifling
- feeling unable to breathe or express oneself freely
- replicate
- to make an exact copy of something
- competitive edge
- a feature that makes something better than others
- polish
- to improve something by making small final changes
Write your own and get a band
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Informal. Write to a friend or relative by first name and close with Best wishes, Love or See you soon.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
This response achieves Band 8 by addressing all three bullet points with a natural, consistent informal tone and specific, relevant suggestions. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide specific job examples or using an overly formal tone that contradicts the relationship with the friend.
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