Formal letter of complaint regarding substandard hospital care
You were recently treated at a hospital but the care was substandard.
Write a letter to the hospital administration. In your letter:
- provide the dates of your admission and department
- detail the specific issues you encountered regarding patient care
- suggest improvements to ensure other patients do not have the same experience
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear Sir or Madam,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my profound dissatisfaction regarding the medical care I received during my recent admission to the General Surgery Department from 12th to 15th October.
My primary concern involves the significant lack of communication and hygiene. During my stay, nurses frequently failed to administer my prescribed pain medication on schedule, often leaving me in acute distress for hours. Furthermore, the bedding in my room was not changed throughout the duration of my four-day stay, despite my repeated requests to the nursing staff. This lack of basic sanitary maintenance was both distressing and unprofessional.
To prevent such lapses from recurring, I suggest that the hospital implements a mandatory digital tracking system for medication administration to ensure staff accountability. Additionally, a stricter audit of room hygiene standards should be conducted by floor managers daily to ensure that all patient areas remain clean and welcoming.
I trust that you will investigate these matters thoroughly to improve the quality of patient care at your facility. I look forward to your prompt response regarding this serious issue.
Yours faithfully,
Arthur P. Henderson
184 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
A Band 8 response fully addresses every bullet point with specific, logical details and maintains a consistently professional tone throughout. A common Band 6 error is providing vague complaints without suggesting actionable improvements, which fails to satisfy the final part of the prompt.
- Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
- If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
- No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.
Useful phrases from the letter
- profound dissatisfaction
- a feeling of being very unhappy or disappointed
- acute distress
- a state of extreme physical or mental pain
- sanitary maintenance
- the process of keeping an area clean hygienically
- lapses
- temporary failures in concentration, memory, or professional standards
- accountability
- the obligation to accept responsibility for one's actions
- thoroughly
- in a way that covers every necessary detail
Write your own and get a band
Answer this prompt in a timed General Training writing test and get a band for task achievement, coherence, vocabulary and grammar, with the sentences to fix.
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
A Band 8 response fully addresses every bullet point with specific, logical details and maintains a consistently professional tone throughout. A common Band 6 error is providing vague complaints without suggesting actionable improvements, which fails to satisfy the final part of the prompt.
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