Inquiry letter to university regarding scholarship application
You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university.
Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter:
- explain which course you are interested in
- say what you know about the university
- explain why you should receive the scholarship
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Admissions Committee,
I am writing to express my keen interest in the Master of Environmental Science program at your institution, which I am eager to pursue through your international scholarship scheme.
Having researched your university extensively, I am particularly drawn to your reputation for pioneering climate research. The integration of practical field studies with theoretical modelling at your faculty is globally renowned, and I am impressed by the university’s commitment to sustainability, specifically the recent carbon-neutral initiatives implemented across your campus.
I believe I am an ideal candidate for this scholarship due to my strong academic background in ecology and my dedication to community-led conservation projects. During my undergraduate studies, I led a team that successfully restored local wetland habitats, demonstrating both leadership and a practical application of environmental science. Securing this funding would allow me to focus entirely on my research, enabling me to contribute meaningfully to your department’s ongoing projects.
I have attached my academic transcripts and a portfolio of my previous work for your consideration. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you regarding the next steps in the selection process.
Yours faithfully,
Julian Thorne
194 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
A Band 8 response maintains a consistently formal tone while addressing all three bullet points with specific, relevant details. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide a logical reason for the scholarship request, often settling for vague statements about wanting to study abroad rather than highlighting personal achievements.
- Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
- If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
- No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.
Useful phrases from the letter
- keen interest
- a strong desire or enthusiasm for something
- pioneering
- involving new ideas or methods for the first time
- carbon-neutral
- having no net release of carbon dioxide into atmosphere
- undergraduate studies
- the period of study before obtaining a first degree
- meaningfully
- in a way that is important or significant
- selection process
- the series of steps used to choose candidates
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
A Band 8 response maintains a consistently formal tone while addressing all three bullet points with specific, relevant details. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide a logical reason for the scholarship request, often settling for vague statements about wanting to study abroad rather than highlighting personal achievements.
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