Letter to a classmate regarding an unreturned textbook
You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
- apologize for the mistake
- find out how important the book is to him/her
- say what you will do
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Marcus,
I hope you have settled back in well after your flight home. I am writing to you today with a very red face because I have just discovered your copy of 'Advanced Macroeconomics' tucked away on my bookshelf.
I am incredibly sorry for this oversight. I honestly thought I had handed it back to you during our final study session at the library before you left. It was completely careless of me to pack it in my bag, and I feel terrible that you had to travel home without such an essential resource.
Could you please let me know if you need this book urgently for your current studies? I imagine it must be quite difficult to source another copy where you are, and I want to understand how much of an inconvenience I have caused you.
Since you are now overseas, I have already looked into international shipping rates. I am more than happy to post it back to your home address via a tracked courier service this week. Please send me your current postal details whenever you have a moment, and I will get it sent off immediately.
Best wishes,
Sam
195 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
This letter achieves Band 8 by addressing all three bullet points with a natural, consistent tone and clear, logical progression. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to propose a specific solution for the return of the book or using overly formal language that sounds unnatural for a classmate.
- Write to a friend or relative by first name and close with Best wishes, Love or See you soon.
- Contractions, phrasal verbs and a warm opening line are expected; a stiff formal tone loses marks here.
- Still cover every bullet in its own paragraph; friendly does not mean unstructured.
Useful phrases from the letter
- red face
- an expression indicating that one feels very embarrassed
- oversight
- a failure to notice or do something important
- essential resource
- a very important item needed for a task
- inconvenience
- a situation that causes trouble or extra effort
- tracked courier
- a delivery service that provides progress updates
- postal details
- the specific address information needed for shipping
Write your own and get a band
Answer this prompt in a timed General Training writing test and get a band for task achievement, coherence, vocabulary and grammar, with the sentences to fix.
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Informal. Write to a friend or relative by first name and close with Best wishes, Love or See you soon.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
This letter achieves Band 8 by addressing all three bullet points with a natural, consistent tone and clear, logical progression. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to propose a specific solution for the return of the book or using overly formal language that sounds unnatural for a classmate.
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