Letter to building manager regarding bicycle parking issues
You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work.
Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter:
- explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute
- mention what problems you have encountered with parking
- what you recommend to solve the problems
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Mr. Henderson,
I am writing to express my concerns regarding the current bicycle storage facilities at the office complex. As a tenant in the building, I have recently transitioned to cycling to work to reduce my carbon footprint and improve my physical fitness.
Unfortunately, the existing parking area is entirely inadequate. The current racks are frequently overcrowded, leaving no space for my bicycle, which forces me to secure it to nearby railings. Furthermore, the area lacks proper overhead cover, leaving cycles exposed to the elements, and there is a noticeable lack of adequate lighting, which raises significant security concerns.
To address these issues, I suggest installing a larger, covered bicycle shelter that is equipped with secure, bolted-down racks. Additionally, installing motion-sensor lighting would greatly improve the safety of the area for employees arriving or departing during early morning or evening hours. Implementing a simple registration system for regular cyclists could also help manage the available space more effectively.
I hope you will consider these improvements to encourage more staff to adopt sustainable commuting habits. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Arthur Pringle
189 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
A Band 8 response clearly addresses all bullet points with specific, logical suggestions and maintains a consistently professional tone throughout. A common Band 6 error is failing to provide practical recommendations, instead focusing only on the frustration of the situation without proposing a resolution.
- Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
- If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
- No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.
Useful phrases from the letter
- carbon footprint
- The total amount of greenhouse gases produced by someone.
- inadequate
- Not enough or not good enough for a purpose.
- exposed to the elements
- Unprotected from harsh weather conditions like rain or wind.
- motion-sensor
- A device that activates when it detects physical movement.
- sustainable
- Using methods that do not harm the natural environment.
- transitioned
- Changed from one state or condition to another.
Write your own and get a band
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
A Band 8 response clearly addresses all bullet points with specific, logical suggestions and maintains a consistently professional tone throughout. A common Band 6 error is failing to provide practical recommendations, instead focusing only on the frustration of the situation without proposing a resolution.
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