Letter to the local newspaper regarding shopping facilities
You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved there.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
- say in general what you like about shopping in your area
- say what is wrong with the facilities
- suggest how they can be improved
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Editor,
I am writing to express my views regarding the current state of shopping facilities in our neighbourhood. As a long-term resident, I frequently visit our local high street and believe it is important to share my observations.
I generally appreciate the variety of independent retailers we have, which gives our area a unique character. The convenience of having essential services within walking distance is a significant asset to our community and fosters a sense of local connection that is often missing in larger, sterile shopping centres.
However, the current facilities are increasingly inadequate. Specifically, there is a severe lack of bicycle racks, forcing cyclists to chain their bikes to lamp posts, which creates clutter on the pavement. Furthermore, the public seating areas are dilapidated and often occupied by litter, making them unwelcoming for elderly shoppers who need to rest.
To improve these conditions, the council should install modern, secure cycle stands at key intersections. Additionally, a scheduled cleaning programme for public benches and the installation of more accessible waste bins would greatly enhance the overall experience for everyone. I hope these suggestions will be considered to revitalise our local shopping district.
Yours faithfully,
Jonathan Miller
197 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
A Band 8 response fully addresses all three bullet points with specific, relevant suggestions while maintaining a consistently formal tone appropriate for a newspaper editor. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide concrete suggestions, instead offering vague complaints without proposing actionable improvements for the council.
- Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
- If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
- No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.
Useful phrases from the letter
- independent retailers
- shops that are not part of large chains
- sterile
- lacking interest, character or any human warmth
- inadequate
- not good enough or too small in quantity
- dilapidated
- in a state of disrepair or physical ruin
- revitalise
- to give new life or energy to something
- asset
- a useful or valuable quality or person
Write your own and get a band
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
A Band 8 response fully addresses all three bullet points with specific, relevant suggestions while maintaining a consistently formal tone appropriate for a newspaper editor. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide concrete suggestions, instead offering vague complaints without proposing actionable improvements for the council.
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