Requesting Further Language Training from a Manager
You and your colleagues have recently attended a foreign language training course organized by your company. Now you all want to do some more language training.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
- say how you and your colleagues felt about the course
- explain why you all want to do more language training
- suggest when and where the training could take place
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,
Band 8 sample letter
Dear Mr. Henderson,
I am writing on behalf of the project team to share our feedback regarding the recent foreign language course and to propose a follow-up training programme.
We all thoroughly enjoyed the intensive Spanish sessions last month. The instructor was exceptionally engaging, and the practical focus on business terminology significantly improved our confidence when communicating with our Madrid-based counterparts. The general consensus is that the course was both highly motivating and immediately applicable to our daily tasks.
Given the recent expansion of our international client base, we believe that further training is essential to maintain our competitive edge. Our current proficiency is a solid foundation, but we are keen to develop more advanced negotiation skills. Continuing this development will undoubtedly streamline our collaborative efforts and reduce potential misunderstandings in high-stakes meetings.
We would like to suggest scheduling bi-weekly afternoon sessions at our office premises. Hosting the training here would minimize downtime and allow more staff members to participate without disrupting their core responsibilities. We would appreciate your support in securing a budget for this initiative.
Thank you for considering our proposal. I look forward to discussing this further.
Yours sincerely,
Julian Thorne
194 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.
Why this scores well
This response achieves Band 8 by addressing all bullet points with specific, well-developed ideas and maintaining a consistently professional, semi-formal tone. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide a clear, logical reason for the request, often resulting in vague or repetitive sentences about 'needing to learn more'.
- Write to someone you know but not closely, such as a manager, landlord or neighbour, using their title and surname.
- Polite and friendly at once: a few contractions are fine, slang is not. Close with Yours sincerely or Kind regards.
- State the purpose in the first two sentences; small talk costs words you need for the bullets.
Useful phrases from the letter
- counterparts
- people who have the same position in another company
- general consensus
- a generally accepted opinion among a group of people
- competitive edge
- an advantage that makes a company more successful
- high-stakes
- involving serious risks if things do not succeed
- streamline
- to make a process work more efficiently
- premises
- the land and buildings owned by a company
Write your own and get a band
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Frequently asked questions
Is this letter formal or informal?
Semi-formal. Write to someone you know but not closely, such as a manager, landlord or neighbour, using their title and surname.
How long should an IELTS General Training letter be?
At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
What does the examiner look for?
This response achieves Band 8 by addressing all bullet points with specific, well-developed ideas and maintaining a consistently professional, semi-formal tone. A common Band 6 mistake is failing to provide a clear, logical reason for the request, often resulting in vague or repetitive sentences about 'needing to learn more'.
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