Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Average weekly hours of unpaid work by marital and parental status

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework, and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Average hours of unpaid work per week by marital and parental status (hours)
020406080100Without ChildrenWith 1-2 ChildrenWith 3 + Children
  • Married Women
  • Married Men
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Without ChildrenWith 1-2 ChildrenWith 3 + Children
Married Women305160
Married Men191917.5

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates the average weekly hours spent on unpaid domestic tasks, such as childcare and housework, by married individuals categorized by their parental status. Overall, it is evident that married women undertake a much larger share of unpaid labour than their male counterparts, and this disparity grows as family size increases.

For married women, the time spent on unpaid work rises steadily with the number of children. Those without children spend 30 hours per week on such tasks, which increases to 51 hours for those with one or two children. This figure peaks at 60 hours for women with three or more children, representing a doubling of the time spent compared to those without children.

In contrast, the time spent by married men on unpaid work remains relatively low and stable, regardless of the number of children. Men without children and those with one or two children both contribute 19 hours per week. Interestingly, this figure dips slightly to 17.5 hours for men with three or more children. Consequently, while women’s unpaid workload increases significantly with family size, men’s contribution remains largely static, resulting in a pronounced gender imbalance in larger households.

194 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

disparity
a great difference between two or more things
counterparts
people or things that have the same function
undertake
to commit oneself to and begin a task
static
lacking in movement, action, or change
imbalance
a lack of proportion or relation between things
steadily
in a regular and even manner without interruption

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Married women consistently perform significantly more hours of unpaid work than married men, with the gender gap widening substantially as the number of children increases.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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