Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentages of students proficient in a foreign language across six countries

The bar charts below provide information about percentages of students who are proficient in a foreign language in different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentages of students proficient in a foreign language by country and gender (%)
020406080100ChinaRomaniaThailandIndiaRussiaVietnam
  • Male
  • Female
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ChinaRomaniaThailandIndiaRussiaVietnam
Male174231563537
Female306527674356

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates the proportions of male and female students who are proficient in a foreign language across six different countries: China, Romania, Thailand, India, Russia, and Vietnam. Overall, it is evident that female students typically demonstrate higher proficiency levels than their male counterparts, with the notable exception of Thailand. Furthermore, India and Romania stand out as having the highest overall proficiency rates among the surveyed nations.

In terms of the highest proficiency, India leads the group, with 67% of females and 56% of males being proficient. Romania follows closely, where 65% of females are proficient compared to 42% of males. In contrast, China reports the lowest proficiency rates for both genders, at 30% for females and 17% for males.

Regarding the remaining countries, Vietnam shows a significant gender gap, with 56% of females proficient versus 37% of males. Similarly, in Russia, 43% of females and 35% of males possess foreign language proficiency. Thailand presents a unique trend, being the only country where male students outperform females, with 31% of males being proficient compared to 27% of females.

179 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

counterparts
people or things that have the same function
proportions
the relationship of one part to the whole
outperform
to perform better than someone or something else
notable
worthy of attention or notice; quite remarkable
significant
sufficiently great or important to be worthy
illustrates
to provide a visual representation of data

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Overall, females generally show higher levels of foreign language proficiency than males in most countries, with India and Romania recording the highest figures, while Thailand is the only nation where males outperform females.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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