Academic Writing Task 1 · process diagram

The life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The life cycle of a salmon
  1. 1.Eggs in fresh water
  2. 2.Alevin
  3. 3.Fry
  4. 4.Parr
  5. 5.Smolt
  6. 6.Adult
  7. 7.Spawning Adult

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Band 8 sample answer

The provided diagram illustrates the various stages in the life cycle of a salmon, beginning from the egg stage in fresh water and concluding with the spawning adult. Overall, the process is cyclical and spans several years, requiring the fish to transition between fresh water environments and the sea to complete its development.

The cycle commences with eggs laid in fresh water, which hatch after approximately three months. The resulting alevin feed on their yolk sacs for several weeks before maturing into fry, which are five to ten weeks old and capable of swimming. Subsequently, the fish develop into parr, characterised by 'finger' markings, and eventually reach the smolt stage at one to three years of age, at which point they group together and migrate to the sea.

Once in the ocean, the salmon spend between one and eight years maturing into adults. The final phase involves the adult salmon returning to fresh water to spawn. This spawning adult stage is relatively short, as the fish die within two weeks of reproduction, thereby completing the life cycle and allowing the process to begin anew with the next generation of eggs.

190 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about process diagrams

commences
to begin or start a particular process
subsequently
happening after something else in a sequence
maturing
the process of becoming fully grown or developed
migrate
to move from one region to another periodically
characterised by
having a particular feature or quality as typical
anew
in a new or different and typically better way

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The life cycle of a salmon is a complex process that takes place in both fresh water and the sea, involving seven distinct developmental stages.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe process diagrams?

Say how many stages there are and where the process starts and ends. Use the passive and sequencers: first, after this, once, finally. Keep every stage; a missing step costs task achievement.

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