Top business priorities for US companies of different sizes in 2016
The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
- Converting contacts/leads to customers
- Increasing number of contacts/leads
- Increasing revenue derived from existing customers
- Providing ROI of marketing activities
- Reducing the cost of contact/lead/customer acquisition
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| 0 to 25 employees | 26 to 200 employees | 201 or more employees | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Converting contacts/leads to customers | 71 | 73 | 66 |
| Increasing number of contacts/leads | 71 | 79 | 62 |
| Increasing revenue derived from existing customers | 43 | 47 | 55 |
| Providing ROI of marketing activities | 33 | 47 | 58 |
| Reducing the cost of contact/lead/customer acquisition | 20 | 26 | 30 |
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Band 8 sample answer
The bar chart illustrates the primary business priorities for companies in the USA in 2016, categorised by their number of employees. Overall, it is evident that lead generation and conversion were the most critical goals for businesses regardless of their size, whereas reducing acquisition costs was consistently ranked as the lowest priority.
For smaller companies (0-25 employees) and mid-sized firms (26-200 employees), converting contacts into customers and increasing the number of leads were the top two priorities. Specifically, 71% of the smallest firms prioritised both, while mid-sized companies showed a stronger focus on increasing leads at 79%, compared to 73% for conversion. In contrast, larger organisations (201+ employees) prioritised conversion (66%) over increasing leads (62%).
Regarding other objectives, larger companies placed significantly more emphasis on increasing revenue from existing customers (55%) and demonstrating marketing ROI (58%) compared to their smaller counterparts. For instance, only 33% of the smallest firms focused on marketing ROI. Finally, reducing acquisition costs was the least prioritised goal across all groups, peaking at 30% for the largest companies and dropping to just 20% for the smallest businesses.
181 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.
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Frequently asked questions
What should the overview say?
Across all company sizes, converting leads and increasing the number of contacts were the primary priorities, while reducing acquisition costs remained the least significant objective.
How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?
At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
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Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
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