IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree) · Academic

Urban development and green spaces: is preservation essential?

The question

As cities grow, green spaces are often sacrificed for new buildings. Is it important to keep green spaces in cities, strategies can be used to protect them?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
I firmly believe that maintaining green areas is vital for urban habitability, and this can be achieved through strict zoning regulations and innovative architectural designs.
Paragraph 2:
Green spaces are indispensable for mitigating the environmental and psychological pressures inherent in densely populated urban centres.
Paragraph 3:
Governments can safeguard these areas by enforcing urban growth boundaries and incentivising the integration of vegetation into new infrastructure.
  1. State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
  2. Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
  3. A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.

Band 8 sample essay

Rapid urbanisation frequently prioritises the expansion of residential and commercial infrastructure, often at the expense of natural landscapes. While such development is necessary to accommodate increasing populations, I firmly believe that maintaining green areas is vital for urban habitability, and this can be achieved through strict zoning regulations and innovative architectural designs.

Green spaces are indispensable for mitigating the environmental and psychological pressures inherent in densely populated urban centres. These areas act as essential 'lungs' for a city, filtering pollutants and reducing the urban heat island effect, which otherwise elevates temperatures significantly. Furthermore, public parks and community gardens offer necessary respite from the frantic pace of city life, directly contributing to the mental well-being of inhabitants. For example, studies in London have demonstrated that residents living near accessible green belts report lower stress levels and higher overall life satisfaction compared to those residing in entirely concrete environments.

Governments can safeguard these areas by enforcing urban growth boundaries and incentivising the integration of vegetation into new infrastructure. By designating protected zones where construction is strictly prohibited, city planners can prevent urban sprawl from encroaching upon vital ecosystems. Additionally, vertical forests and rooftop gardens offer practical solutions for incorporating nature into high-density areas where land is scarce. Singapore serves as a prime example, where developers are mandated to replace any greenery lost during construction with equivalent or superior landscaping, ensuring that densification does not necessitate the complete eradication of nature.

In summary, the preservation of urban green spaces is not merely an aesthetic preference but a fundamental requirement for sustainable living. Through rigorous land-use policies and the creative adoption of biophilic design, cities can successfully balance the demands of modern infrastructure with the essential need to sustain natural environments for future generations.

290 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay earns a Band 8 by directly addressing both parts of the prompt with nuanced, well-developed arguments and specific real-world examples. A Band 6 response typically fails by providing only general statements about nature being good without discussing specific strategies or by neglecting one half of the prompt entirely.

Vocabulary from the essay

Urbanisation
The process of cities growing and becoming larger.
Habitability
The quality of being suitable for people living.
Mitigating
Making something less severe, serious, or painful.
Urban heat island
An area where city temperatures are significantly higher.
Urban sprawl
The uncontrolled expansion of cities into surrounding areas.
Biophilic design
Architecture that connects people to the natural environment.
Densification
Increasing the number of people living in areas.
Eradication
The complete destruction or removal of something.

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Urban development and green spaces: is preservation essential?"?

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 290 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay earns a Band 8 by directly addressing both parts of the prompt with nuanced, well-developed arguments and specific real-world examples. A Band 6 response typically fails by providing only general statements about nature being good without discussing specific strategies or by neglecting one half of the prompt entirely.

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