IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question · General Training

Legislating reduced working hours: reasons and personal assessment

The question

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
Governments implement these regulations to protect public wellbeing, and I believe this shift is a highly positive development for modern society.
Paragraph 2:
Legislative limits on working hours are primarily designed to prevent professional burnout and safeguard the physical and mental health of the workforce.
Paragraph 3:
Mandatory rest periods foster a better work-life balance, which ultimately enhances employee productivity and long-term organisational loyalty.
  1. Answer the first question in body paragraph one and the second in body paragraph two.
  2. Signpost each with the question's own words so the examiner can tick both parts.
  3. Missing either part caps task response at 5, however good the language.

Band 8 sample essay

In many nations, authorities have enacted legislation to restrict the maximum number of hours employees can work per week. This trend is driven by a growing recognition of the hazards associated with overwork, and I contend that these measures represent a constructive step toward a more sustainable and humane working culture.

Governments introduce these laws primarily to mitigate the risks of professional burnout, which has become an endemic issue in competitive industries. When employees are subjected to excessive hours, their physical health often deteriorates, leading to chronic stress and exhaustion. By enforcing strict caps on working time, the state ensures that individuals have sufficient recovery periods. For example, the implementation of the Working Time Directive in several European countries has been instrumental in reducing workplace accidents caused by fatigue, thereby protecting the fundamental rights of the labour force to a safe environment.

Furthermore, limiting working hours facilitates a healthier balance between professional responsibilities and personal life, which yields significant long-term benefits. When individuals are not tethered to their desks for extended periods, they have more time to devote to their families, hobbies, and personal development. This improvement in quality of life often results in higher levels of job satisfaction and mental clarity. Research has indicated that firms in countries with shorter work weeks frequently observe higher rates of employee retention and creativity, as rested workers are inherently more engaged and efficient than their overworked counterparts.

To summarise, the shift towards regulated working hours is a necessary response to the mounting pressures of contemporary employment. By prioritising the health of citizens and encouraging a sustainable approach to labour, these laws foster a more productive and satisfied society, which is why I view them as a profoundly positive development.

287 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

The essay achieves Band 8 by directly addressing both parts of the prompt with logical progression and precise vocabulary. A Band 6 response often fails to provide specific examples or drifts into generalisations about 'modern life' without linking them clearly to the legislative aspect of the question.

Vocabulary from the essay

endemic
commonly found within a particular group or area
mitigate
to reduce the severity or impact of something
tethered
tied down or restricted to a specific place
labour force
all the people who are available to work
contemporary
belonging to or occurring in the present time
profoundly
in a way that has a very great effect
instrumental
serving as an important means of achieving something
inherently
in a way that is a permanent characteristic

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Legislating reduced working hours: reasons and personal assessment"?

Two-part question. Answer the first question in body paragraph one and the second in body paragraph two.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 287 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

The essay achieves Band 8 by directly addressing both parts of the prompt with logical progression and precise vocabulary. A Band 6 response often fails to provide specific examples or drifts into generalisations about 'modern life' without linking them clearly to the legislative aspect of the question.

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