Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

First-year university dropout: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 280 words
  • Problem and solution
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many countries, a large number of students leave university during their first year without finishing their course. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Students leave mainly because of poor preparation and inadequate support, and schools and universities can address both.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Causes include unsuitable course choices, financial pressure from part-time work and loneliness after leaving home.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Better careers guidance, early support for students at risk, accessible grants and peer mentoring would help.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model280 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Starting university is an exciting step, yet a considerable number of students abandon their studies before the end of the first year. This problem has several causes, most of which relate to poor preparation and inadequate support, and both universities and schools can do much to address them.

One major cause is that students often choose courses without a clear understanding of what they involve. A school leaver may select law because it sounds prestigious, only to discover that the reading load is overwhelming and the content holds little interest. Financial pressure is another factor. Students who must work long hours in part-time jobs to pay for rent and food may fall behind with assignments and eventually conclude that they cannot continue. Finally, many first-year students feel isolated after moving away from home, and loneliness can quickly turn into a loss of motivation.

Several measures could reduce the dropout rate. Firstly, schools should provide more thorough careers guidance, including opportunities to attend sample lectures or speak to current undergraduates, so that applicants make informed choices. Secondly, universities could identify students at risk early by monitoring attendance and coursework submissions, and then offer them meetings with a personal tutor. Thirdly, institutions and governments should ensure that financial support, such as grants or hardship funds, is easy to apply for and widely publicised. Universities might also organise mentoring schemes in which second-year students help newcomers settle into academic and social life.

In conclusion, students leave university early mainly because of unsuitable course choices, financial strain and isolation. If schools improve guidance and universities offer targeted academic, financial and social support, far more students should be able to complete the degrees they begin.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by identifying three distinct causes and linking each proposed measure to them, so every part of the question is answered. Sequencing words organise the solutions clearly, and the vocabulary is precise and appropriate to an academic topic.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • abandon

    to stop doing something before it is finished

  • inadequate

    not good enough or not enough in amount

  • prestigious

    respected and admired as important

  • overwhelming

    too great to deal with easily

  • hardship

    a situation of having too little money to live comfortably

  • mentoring

    guidance given by a more experienced person

  • targeted

    aimed at a particular group or need

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for education.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "First-year university dropout"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 280 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by identifying three distinct causes and linking each proposed measure to them, so every part of the question is answered. Sequencing words organise the solutions clearly, and the vocabulary is precise and appropriate to an academic topic.

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