Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Globalization and the loss of cultural identities: opinion essay: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 275 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Globalization is causing the loss of local cultural identities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I largely agree that globalization threatens local cultural identities, although it also offers opportunities for cultural hybridisation.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    The global dominance of Western media and consumer culture leads to the erosion of unique local traditions and languages.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Increased international interaction can foster a sense of shared human identity which potentially diminishes the significance of distinctive national customs.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

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Band 8-style model275 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

The rapid expansion of global trade and communication technologies has undeniably transformed how societies interact. While some argue that this interconnectedness fosters progress, I believe it poses a significant threat to the preservation of distinct local cultural identities, as global trends often overshadow indigenous practices.

Primarily, the ubiquity of Western media and consumer brands exerts immense pressure on smaller cultures to conform to a homogenous lifestyle. When global corporations dominate local markets, traditional crafts, local culinary customs, and indigenous languages are frequently marginalised. For instance, the widespread adoption of fast-food chains and Hollywood entertainment in developing nations often results in younger generations losing interest in their ancestral heritage, viewing it as outdated compared to the glossy appeal of globalised alternatives.

Furthermore, the ease of digital communication facilitates a cultural convergence that prioritises international standards over regional peculiarities. As societies become increasingly integrated, there is a tendency to adopt shared values and behaviours, which inevitably dilutes the unique characteristics that define a specific group. A clear example of this is the decline of minority languages worldwide, as English and a few other major languages become the primary mediums for education and social media, rendering unique local dialects obsolete and weakening the cultural foundations they once supported.

In summary, the forces of globalization act as a catalyst for the standardisation of human society, which often comes at the expense of local traditions. While some might claim this leads to a broader global perspective, the loss of cultural diversity is a profound consequence that cannot be ignored. Protecting these unique identities requires a concerted effort to value and promote local customs in the face of overwhelming international influence.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This model aims to illustrate Band 8 features by maintaining a consistent, sophisticated argument supported by clear examples and precise vocabulary throughout. A Band 6 answer typically fails to address the prompt's complexity, relying on repetitive generalisations and lacking the specific, logical development required for a higher score.

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8 words

Vocabulary from the essay

  • ubiquity

    the state of being found everywhere at once

  • homogenous

    consisting of parts that are all the same

  • marginalised

    treated as insignificant or outside the mainstream

  • ancestral heritage

    traditions and traits passed down from forefathers

  • cultural convergence

    the tendency for cultures to become more similar

  • peculiarities

    distinctive features that belong to a specific group

  • obsolete

    no longer produced or used due to age

  • catalyst

    something that causes an important change to happen

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for culture and tradition.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Globalization and the loss of cultural identities: opinion essay"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 275 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This model aims to illustrate Band 8 features by maintaining a consistent, sophisticated argument supported by clear examples and precise vocabulary throughout. A Band 6 answer typically fails to address the prompt's complexity, relying on repetitive generalisations and lacking the specific, logical development required for a higher score.

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