International tourism and cultural tension: to what extent
The question
International tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.
Plan before you write
- Position:
- I believe that international tourism primarily fosters empathy and mutual understanding, although I acknowledge that superficial interactions can occasionally lead to friction.
- Paragraph 2:
- Tourism promotes cultural appreciation by providing firsthand exposure to diverse traditions and lifestyles.
- Paragraph 3:
- While some tourists may exhibit disrespectful behaviour, these instances are exceptions rather than the norm.
- State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
- Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
- A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.
Band 8 sample essay
The proliferation of global travel has sparked a debate regarding its impact on cross-cultural relations. Some critics argue that mass tourism breeds resentment, yet I contend that travelling serves as a vital bridge for human connection and mutual tolerance.
Exposure to unfamiliar customs and environments is the most effective remedy for prejudice. When individuals step outside their comfort zones, they often discard stereotypical views held about foreign nations. For example, tourists visiting Japan frequently develop a deep respect for the local emphasis on discipline and harmony, which contrasts sharply with the misconceptions sometimes portrayed in mainstream media. This direct engagement transforms abstract ideas into tangible appreciation, thereby reducing the likelihood of hostility.
Admittedly, tensions can arise when travellers act insensitively towards local norms. Some tourists may inadvertently offend residents by ignoring dress codes or disregarding sacred sites, which can lead to friction. However, such conflicts are typically a result of ignorance rather than malice. When visitors are encouraged to engage with local communities respectfully, these minor misunderstandings often turn into opportunities for education. A prime example is the rise of eco-tourism, where travellers are guided to interact with indigenous groups in a manner that prioritises cultural preservation and genuine dialogue over mere consumption.
In summary, while occasional cultural clashes may occur due to thoughtlessness, the overarching effect of international tourism is the cultivation of understanding. By facilitating personal connections across borders, tourism remains a powerful tool for dismantling barriers and promoting a more harmonious global society.
246 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.
Why this scores Band 8
This essay earns a Band 8 by maintaining a clear, consistent position while addressing both sides of the argument with sophisticated examples. A Band 6 answer typically fails to provide specific, relevant examples and relies on generalisations rather than a nuanced discussion of the topic.
Vocabulary from the essay
- proliferation
- a rapid increase in the number of something
- firsthand
- coming directly from experience or original source
- tangible
- capable of being touched or clearly seen
- malice
- the intention or desire to do evil
- indigenous
- originating naturally in a particular specific place
- dismantling
- taking apart or destroying something bit by bit
- harmonious
- forming a pleasing or consistent whole together
- misconceptions
- views or opinions based on faulty thinking
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Frequently asked questions
What type of essay is "International tourism and cultural tension: to what extent"?
Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
How long should the answer be?
At least 250 words. This sample is 246 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.
What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?
This essay earns a Band 8 by maintaining a clear, consistent position while addressing both sides of the argument with sophisticated examples. A Band 6 answer typically fails to provide specific, relevant examples and relies on generalisations rather than a nuanced discussion of the topic.
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