IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree) · General Training

Has social media caused more harm than good?

The question

Social media has done more harm than good to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
While acknowledging the drawbacks, I contend that social media has provided more benefits to society through global connectivity and the democratisation of information.
Paragraph 2:
Social media serves as a vital tool for bridging geographical divides and fostering meaningful personal connections.
Paragraph 3:
The platform acts as a catalyst for social progress by providing a voice to marginalised groups and facilitating the rapid dissemination of knowledge.
  1. State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
  2. Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
  3. A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.

Band 8 sample essay

The rapid expansion of social networking platforms has sparked intense debate regarding their overall societal impact. Although critics highlight significant concerns such as the erosion of privacy and the proliferation of misinformation, I maintain that these platforms have generated more advantages than disadvantages by enhancing global communication and empowering individuals.

Primarily, social media has revolutionised the way humans interact, effectively dismantling physical barriers. Individuals can maintain long-standing relationships and forge new professional networks regardless of their location. For instance, during the recent global pandemic, these platforms were instrumental in preventing social isolation, allowing families to remain connected and businesses to continue operating through virtual collaboration. This unprecedented level of connectivity has undeniably fostered a more integrated global community.

Furthermore, social media serves as a potent vehicle for social change and the democratisation of information. It provides an egalitarian space where marginalised voices can influence public discourse and hold institutions accountable. A clear example of this is the rise of grassroots movements that have utilised digital platforms to organise campaigns against systemic injustice, successfully raising global awareness for issues that were previously ignored by traditional media outlets. By lowering the barrier to entry for public debate, these tools have made society more transparent and inclusive.

In summary, while the negative aspects of digital interactions cannot be overlooked, the benefits of enhanced connectivity and increased civic participation are more significant. The positive influence of social media on human interaction and social justice outweighs its inherent risks, provided that users navigate these platforms with sufficient critical awareness.

254 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a clear, consistent position throughout while supporting arguments with specific, relevant examples. A Band 6 response typically fails to address the 'to what extent' aspect, often listing general pros and cons without providing a definitive conclusion or logical development.

Vocabulary from the essay

democratisation
making something accessible to a wider general population
proliferation
the rapid increase in the number of something
dismantling
taking apart or destroying a structure or system
instrumental
serving as a crucial means for achieving something
egalitarian
relating to the principle that all people equal
dissemination
the act of spreading information to many people
systemic
affecting an entire system or body of society
inherent
existing as a natural or permanent essential quality

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Has social media caused more harm than good?"?

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 254 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a clear, consistent position throughout while supporting arguments with specific, relevant examples. A Band 6 response typically fails to address the 'to what extent' aspect, often listing general pros and cons without providing a definitive conclusion or logical development.

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