IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree) · Academic

Testing new medicines on animals: to what extent agree

The question

Testing new medicines on animals is a necessary evil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
I firmly believe that animal testing is a necessary evil because it remains the only reliable method to ensure human safety before clinical trials.
Paragraph 2:
Animal experimentation is essential to identify potential side effects and toxicological risks that could prove fatal to humans.
Paragraph 3:
Despite ethical concerns, the current lack of sophisticated alternatives necessitates the use of biological models to study complex physiological interactions.
  1. State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
  2. Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
  3. A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.

Band 8 sample essay

The debate regarding the use of animals in pharmaceutical research is highly contentious, pitting humanitarian concerns against the imperative of medical progress. While the moral implications of causing suffering to sentient beings are profound, I contend that such testing is a necessary evil to safeguard human health.

Primarily, animal models serve as an indispensable safeguard against catastrophic outcomes in human medicine. Before a new drug is administered to volunteers, scientists must ascertain its systemic effects, as laboratory simulations cannot yet replicate the intricate responses of a living organism. For instance, the thalidomide tragedy of the 1950s highlighted the fatal consequences of inadequate testing; subsequently, rigorous protocols involving animal subjects were implemented to detect teratogenic risks, preventing countless birth defects in later years.

Furthermore, the complexity of biological systems often requires the study of whole-organism interactions, which in-vitro methods are currently unable to simulate. While advancements in technology have provided alternatives such as computer modelling and cell cultures, these tools lack the capacity to predict how a substance might influence multifaceted processes like circulation or immune responses. A pertinent example is the development of life-saving vaccines, where observing an active immune system in mammals is critical to determining efficacy and long-term safety before human deployment.

In summary, although the practice of animal testing presents an undeniable ethical dilemma, it remains vital for the advancement of medical science. Until such time as technological alternatives can perfectly emulate the biological environment of a human, the continued use of animals is a regrettable but essential requirement for protecting public health.

256 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a consistent, sophisticated argument supported by clear, logically linked examples. A Band 6 response typically fails by relying on emotional generalizations or repetitive vocabulary without providing specific, concrete evidence to justify the necessity of the practice.

Vocabulary from the essay

contentious
causing or likely to cause an argument or disagreement
sentient
able to perceive or feel things through senses
indispensable
absolutely necessary and cannot be done without
catastrophic
involving or causing sudden great damage or suffering
teratogenic
causing malformation or birth defects in an embryo
multifaceted
having many different aspects or features to consider
emulate
to match or surpass a person or achievement
regrettable
giving rise to regret or a feeling of sorrow

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Testing new medicines on animals: to what extent agree"?

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 256 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a consistent, sophisticated argument supported by clear, logically linked examples. A Band 6 response typically fails by relying on emotional generalizations or repetitive vocabulary without providing specific, concrete evidence to justify the necessity of the practice.

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