IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree) · General Training

Is the death penalty ever justified in modern society?

The question

To what extent do you agree that the death penalty is never justified in a modern society?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
The death penalty cannot be justified in modern society as it risks executing the innocent and fails to deter crime.
Paragraph 2:
The judicial system is fallible, meaning capital punishment risks the irreversible execution of innocent individuals.
Paragraph 3:
State-sanctioned killing fails to act as a more effective deterrent than long-term incarceration.
  1. State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
  2. Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
  3. A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.

Band 8 sample essay

The debate regarding whether the state should retain the authority to execute criminals remains a contentious issue. While some argue that capital punishment provides justice for heinous crimes, I believe that it is never a justified practice in a modern, civilised society.

Primarily, the inherent fallibility of the legal system renders the death penalty morally unacceptable. No justice system is perfect, and the risk of wrongful conviction is a persistent reality. If an innocent person is executed, the state commits an irreversible violation of human rights that cannot be rectified. For example, the development of DNA profiling has led to the exoneration of numerous individuals on death row in the United States, highlighting that judicial errors are not merely theoretical but frequent enough to make state-sanctioned killing a dangerous gamble.

Furthermore, there is little empirical evidence to suggest that capital punishment serves as a superior deterrent compared to life imprisonment. Proponents often claim that the threat of death discourages potential offenders, yet crime rates in jurisdictions that have abolished the practice do not show a corresponding increase in violent offences. A clear illustration of this is found in many European nations, such as Norway, where the focus on rehabilitation and long-term detention has successfully maintained low crime rates without resorting to the ultimate penalty. Consequently, the death penalty fails to fulfil its primary objective of enhancing public safety.

In summary, the risk of executing the innocent and the lack of evidence supporting its efficacy as a deterrent demonstrate that capital punishment has no place in contemporary society. Justice should be defined by the capacity to correct errors and rehabilitate individuals, rather than by the state’s power to end lives. Moving towards abolition reflects a commitment to higher ethical standards and human rights.

292 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay achieves Band 8 by presenting a clear, consistent position with cohesive arguments and sophisticated vocabulary. A Band 6 answer typically fails to address the 'to what extent' prompt, offers repetitive arguments, or lacks concrete examples to support the main points.

Vocabulary from the essay

contentious
causing a lot of argument and disagreement
fallibility
the tendency to make mistakes or be wrong
irreversible
something that cannot be changed or fixed back
exoneration
officially clearing someone of blame for a crime
empirical
based on observation or scientific experience rather than theory
deterrent
something that discourages someone from doing an action
abolition
the formal act of ending a system or practice
rehabilitate
to restore someone to a normal or healthy life

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Is the death penalty ever justified in modern society?"?

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 292 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay achieves Band 8 by presenting a clear, consistent position with cohesive arguments and sophisticated vocabulary. A Band 6 answer typically fails to address the 'to what extent' prompt, offers repetitive arguments, or lacks concrete examples to support the main points.

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