Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Aid provided by six developed nations to developing countries 2008-2010

The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Aid from six developed countries to developing countries (2008-2010) ($ billion)
0510152025USGermanyUKJapanNetherlandsSweden
  • 2008
  • 2009
  • 2010
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USGermanyUKJapanNetherlandsSweden
20082210121277
20092014111098
20102515131187

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates the amount of financial aid provided by six developed countries to developing nations between 2008 and 2010, measured in billions of dollars.

Overall, the United States remained the largest donor throughout the three-year period, despite some fluctuations. Conversely, the Netherlands and Sweden consistently provided the lowest levels of aid among the countries surveyed.

The US contributed $22 billion in 2008, which dipped to $20 billion in 2009 before rising to a peak of $25 billion in 2010. Germany showed a different trend, starting at $10 billion in 2008 and increasing steadily to $14 billion and $15 billion in the subsequent two years. The UK and Japan both experienced a slight decline between 2008 and 2009, with the UK falling from $12 billion to $11 billion and Japan from $12 billion to $10 billion, before both saw a recovery in 2010 to $13 billion and $11 billion respectively.

Regarding the smaller contributors, the Netherlands increased its aid from $7 billion in 2008 to $9 billion in 2009, before dropping back to $8 billion in 2010. Sweden followed a similar pattern, rising from $7 billion to $8 billion in 2009, then returning to $7 billion in 2010.

199 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

fluctuations
irregular rising and falling in number or amount
consistently
acting or done in the same way over time
dipped
a slight or temporary decrease in a value
subsequent
coming after something in time or order
recovery
a return to a normal state of health
contributor
a person or thing that gives something

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The US consistently provided the highest amount of aid throughout the period, while the Netherlands and Sweden remained the smallest contributors among the six nations.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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