Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Employment rates for males and females across six countries 1995-2005

The chart below shows the employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment Rates, by Country, 1995 - 2005 (%)
020406080100AustraliaSwitzerlandIcelandUKNew ZealandUSA
  • 1995 Male
  • 2005 Male
  • 1995 Female
  • 2005 Female
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AustraliaSwitzerlandIcelandUKNew ZealandUSA
1995 Male576671556059
2005 Male697883737271
1995 Female275641512545
2005 Female396853634261

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates changes in employment rates for males and females across six nations between 1995 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that employment figures rose for both genders in every country surveyed, with men consistently recording higher participation rates than women throughout the period.

In 1995, male employment was highest in Iceland at 71%, followed by Switzerland at 66%. By 2005, Iceland remained the leader for male employment, reaching a peak of 83%, while Switzerland also saw a significant rise to 78%. Australia and the UK experienced notable growth in male employment, increasing from 57% and 55% respectively in 1995 to 69% and 73% a decade later. New Zealand and the USA showed similar trends, with male employment rates climbing to 72% and 71% by 2005.

Regarding female employment, Switzerland recorded the highest rate in 1995 at 56%, whereas New Zealand had the lowest at 25%. By 2005, Switzerland continued to lead with 68%, followed by the UK at 63% and the USA at 61%. Australia and New Zealand saw the most dramatic relative growth for women, with rates rising from 27% to 39% and 25% to 42% respectively, although they remained the lowest overall.

197 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

participation rates
the percentage of a population that is employed
consistently
happening in the same way over a period
notable growth
a significant or important increase in value
dramatic
a sudden, striking, or very noticeable change
surveyed
examined or looked at as part of data
relative
considered in relation to something else

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Overall, employment rates increased for both genders in all six countries over the decade, with males consistently maintaining higher employment levels than females.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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