Employment rates for males and females across six countries in 1995 and 2005
The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
- Male, 1995
- Male, 2005
- Female, 1995
- Female, 2005
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| Australia | Switzerland | Iceland | UK | New Zealand | USA | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Male, 1995 | 56 | 65 | 71 | 55 | 60 | 59 |
| Male, 2005 | 69 | 78 | 83 | 72 | 71 | 71 |
| Female, 1995 | 27 | 56 | 41 | 51 | 25 | 45 |
| Female, 2005 | 39 | 68 | 52 | 62 | 41 | 61 |
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Band 8 sample answer
The bar chart illustrates changes in employment rates for males and females across six nations between 1995 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that employment figures rose in every country for both genders, although males consistently recorded higher rates than their female counterparts throughout the decade.
In 1995, male employment was highest in Iceland at 71%, followed by Switzerland at 65%. By 2005, Iceland remained the leader for male employment, reaching a peak of 83%, while Switzerland followed at 78%. The UK, New Zealand, and the USA all saw male employment rise to 72%, 71%, and 71% respectively by 2005. Australia experienced the most significant growth for males, climbing from 56% in 1995 to 69% a decade later.
Regarding female employment, Switzerland recorded the highest rates in both years, increasing from 56% to 68%. Conversely, New Zealand and Australia started with the lowest female employment rates in 1995 at 25% and 27% respectively. By 2005, these figures had improved to 41% and 39%. The UK and USA also showed notable growth, with female employment reaching 62% and 61% respectively by the end of the period.
185 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.
How to write about bar charts
- Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
- If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
- Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
- consistently
- happening in the same way over a period
- counterparts
- people or things that have the same function
- peak
- the highest point or level of something
- notable
- worthy of attention or striking in nature
- conversely
- in a way that is the opposite
- illustrates
- provides a visual representation of the data
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Frequently asked questions
What should the overview say?
Overall, employment rates increased for both genders in all six countries over the ten-year period, with males consistently maintaining higher employment levels than females.
How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?
At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
How do I describe bar charts?
Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
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