Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Employment sector distribution across three distinct age groups

The table below gives information about the employment sectors in which people from 3 age groups worked.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment sectors by age group
employment sector18-25 age group25-40 age group40-65 age group
agriculture579
manufacturing121523
catering684
local government81218
health121512
retail2376
law444
accountancy323
education91212
other21189

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Band 8 sample answer

The table illustrates the distribution of employees across ten different sectors, categorised by three age groups: 18-25, 25-40, and 40-65. Overall, it is evident that employment preferences shift significantly as individuals age, with retail being the most popular choice for the youngest cohort, while manufacturing dominates the oldest group.

For the 18-25 age group, retail is the most significant sector, accounting for 23% of employment, followed closely by the 'other' category at 21%. In contrast, these sectors become less prominent for older workers. Specifically, retail employment drops to 7% for the 25-40 group and further to 6% for those aged 40-65. Similarly, the 'other' category declines steadily from 21% to 9% across the age brackets.

Conversely, sectors such as manufacturing and local government show an upward trend with age. Manufacturing accounts for only 12% of the youngest group but rises to 23% for the 40-65 age group. Likewise, local government employment increases from 8% in the youngest bracket to 18% in the oldest. Meanwhile, law and accountancy remain relatively stable across all ages, with law consistently at 4% and accountancy fluctuating only slightly between 2% and 3%.

187 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about tables

predominantly
for the most part or mainly
cohort
a group of people with shared characteristics
prominent
important, noticeable, or standing out clearly
conversely
introducing a statement that reverses the previous
fluctuating
rising and falling irregularly in number
bracket
a group or category defined by limits

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The data reveals that younger workers are predominantly concentrated in retail and other sectors, whereas older employees are more likely to work in manufacturing and local government.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe tables?

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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