Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Participation rates of Scottish adults in various cultural activities by age

The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Participation In Cultural Activities, By Age
Activity16-24 %25-44 %45-74 %All aged 16 and over %
Any performance*35221722
Undertaking any crafts11172219
Cultural purchases11171816
Any visual arts30161115
Any writing17657
Computer based10956

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Band 8 sample answer

The table illustrates the participation levels of 6,800 Scottish adults across six different cultural activities, categorised by three age groups over a 12-month period. Overall, the data reveals that engagement in cultural activities varies considerably depending on the age of the participants.

Younger adults aged 16-24 were the most active participants in performance-related activities, visual arts, and writing, with figures of 35%, 30%, and 17% respectively. In contrast, these activities saw a steady decline in participation as age increased. For instance, involvement in any performance dropped to 22% for the 25-44 age group and further to 17% for those aged 45-74. Similarly, participation in visual arts plummeted from 30% in the youngest bracket to just 11% in the oldest.

Conversely, activities such as undertaking crafts and making cultural purchases were more popular among older demographics. Craft participation rose from 11% in the 16-24 age group to a peak of 22% among those aged 45-74. Cultural purchases followed a similar upward trend, increasing from 11% to 18% across the same age ranges. Computer-based activities remained relatively low overall, peaking at 10% for the youngest group and declining to 5% for the oldest.

191 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about tables

categorised
Divided into specific groups based on shared characteristics
engagement
The act of participating or being involved in
plummeted
Fell or decreased rapidly and by a lot
conversely
Used to introduce a statement that contrasts sharply
demographics
Statistical data relating to the population and groups
upward trend
A general direction in which something is increasing

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Younger adults are significantly more involved in performance, visual arts, and writing, whereas older age groups show a higher preference for crafts and cultural purchases.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe tables?

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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