Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity: 2010 (%)
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  • Male
  • Female
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15 to 2425 to 3435 to 4445 to 5455 to 6465 and over
Male52.842.239.543.145.146.7
Female47.748.952.553.35347.1

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females across six age brackets who engaged in regular physical activity during 2010. Overall, it is evident that women were more active than men in the majority of age groups, whereas men only recorded higher participation rates in the 15 to 24 age category.

In the youngest group (15 to 24), men were the most active, with 52.8% participating, compared to 47.7% of women. However, this trend reversed significantly in the subsequent age groups. For individuals aged 25 to 34, female participation rose to 48.9%, while male activity dropped to 42.2%. This gap widened further among those aged 35 to 44 and 45 to 54, where female participation peaked at 52.5% and 53.3% respectively, while male figures remained lower at 39.5% and 43.1%.

Regarding the older population, women aged 55 to 64 maintained a higher activity level at 53%, compared to 45.1% for men. Finally, in the 65 and over category, the participation rates for both genders converged, with 46.7% of men and 47.1% of women engaging in regular physical activity, representing the most balanced figures across all age groups.

190 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

proportion
a part, share, or number considered in comparative relation
engaged in
participated or became involved in a particular activity
subsequent
coming after something in time or following order
widened
became larger or broader in extent or range
converged
came together from different directions to meet somewhere
balanced
kept in a steady position with equal proportions

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Overall, women generally participated in more regular physical activity than men across most age groups, with the exception of the youngest cohort.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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