Academic Writing Task 1 · pie chart

Proportions of Australian secondary school graduates by activity in three years

The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed, or in further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

1980
  • employed: 40
  • further education: 50
  • unemployment: 10
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CategoryValue
employed40
further education50
unemployment10
1990
  • employed: 50
  • further education: 38
  • unemployment: 12
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CategoryValue
employed50
further education38
unemployment12
SWEDEN
  • employed: 55
  • further education: 37
  • unemployment: 8
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CategoryValue
employed55
further education37
unemployment8

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Band 8 sample answer

The provided pie charts compare the employment, education, and unemployment status of Australian secondary school graduates across three distinct time points. Overall, it is evident that employment became the most common outcome for graduates by the end of the period, while the percentage of students continuing their education decreased significantly.

In 1980, half of the graduates were engaged in further education, which represented the largest category. At that time, 40% of graduates were employed, while 10% were unemployed. By 1990, the situation shifted; the proportion of employed graduates rose to 50%, overtaking further education, which fell to 38%. Simultaneously, the unemployment rate saw a slight increase to 12%.

By the final period, labeled as Sweden, the trend towards employment continued, reaching a peak of 55%. Conversely, the proportion of graduates in further education saw a marginal decline to 37% compared to the 1990 figure. Meanwhile, the unemployment rate among graduates dropped to 8%, marking the lowest level recorded across the three charts. In summary, the data highlights a clear transition from academic pursuits toward workforce participation among Australian school leavers over these decades.

183 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about pie charts

proportion
a part or share of a total amount
overtaking
to catch up with and surpass in progress
marginal
a very small or slight change in amount
conversely
in a way that is the opposite
trend
a general direction in which something is developing
peak
the highest point or level of something

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The charts illustrate a general upward trend in employment rates among graduates over the period, while the proportion of those pursuing further education experienced a notable decline.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe pie charts?

Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview. Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority. With two pies, compare the same slice across both.

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