Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Being contactable after working hours: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 303 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many employees can now be contacted by their managers through email and messaging apps outside working hours. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Constant connectivity has some advantages, but the disadvantages are more significant.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Out-of-hours contact helps in emergencies, allows flexible working and suits international teams.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Being always available causes stress and exhaustion, harms family life and lowers daytime productivity.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model303 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Smartphones mean that many employees now carry their workplace in their pocket, and managers can send messages at any time of day. Although this constant connectivity has some advantages, I believe the disadvantages are more significant.

There are situations in which being reachable outside office hours is genuinely useful. If an urgent problem arises, such as a system failure or a sudden change to a client's order, a quick message can prevent a costly delay. For some employees, the ability to reply to emails in the evening also creates flexibility; a parent might leave work early to collect a child from school and then complete a few tasks later at home. In international companies, contact outside normal hours may be unavoidable because colleagues work in different time zones.

However, the costs of constant availability are considerable. When employees feel obliged to check messages late at night or during holidays, they never fully switch off, and over time this can lead to stress, poor sleep and exhaustion. Family life may also suffer, as a parent who is constantly glancing at a phone is not fully present with their children. Moreover, the expectation of instant replies can reduce productivity during the working day, because people who are always tired are less able to concentrate and think creatively. Those who choose not to respond may even worry that they will be seen as less committed than their colleagues.

For these reasons, organisations should set clear boundaries. Managers could agree that messages sent after a certain hour do not require a reply until the next working day, with genuine emergencies handled by a designated person on call.

In conclusion, contact outside working hours can be helpful in emergencies and for flexible working, but in most cases it damages wellbeing and productivity, so its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: advantages and disadvantages are both developed, and the writer's judgement is stated early and confirmed in the conclusion. A practical recommendation extends the argument, and the language shows flexible use of collocations such as 'feel obliged' and 'set clear boundaries'.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • connectivity

    the state of being connected to a network or to other people

  • unavoidable

    impossible to prevent

  • obliged

    feeling that you must do something

  • switch off

    to stop thinking about work and relax

  • exhaustion

    extreme tiredness

  • boundaries

    limits that define acceptable behaviour

  • designated

    chosen for a particular job or purpose

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for work and careers.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Being contactable after working hours"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 303 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: advantages and disadvantages are both developed, and the writer's judgement is stated early and confirmed in the conclusion. A practical recommendation extends the argument, and the language shows flexible use of collocations such as 'feel obliged' and 'set clear boundaries'.

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