Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Both parents working and childcare: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 292 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many families, both parents work full time, so young children spend most of the day in childcare. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The advantages generally outweigh the disadvantages, provided the childcare is of good quality.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Two incomes bring financial security and protect careers, and good nurseries help children develop socially.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Parents may have little energy or time, long days can upset young children, and fees and poor childcare are concerns.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model292 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many households today, both parents work full time, and as a result young children spend much of the day in nurseries or with childminders. Although this arrangement has some drawbacks, I believe its advantages generally outweigh them, provided that the childcare is of good quality.

The most obvious advantage is financial. Two incomes allow many families to afford secure housing, a healthy diet and activities for their children, and they reduce the risk of hardship if one parent loses a job. Working also allows both parents, and especially mothers, to continue their careers rather than sacrificing years of experience and progress. For children themselves, good childcare can be beneficial. In a well-run nursery, they mix with other children, learn to share and take turns, and take part in structured activities that prepare them for school. A child who has spent time in such a setting often finds the first day of school far less daunting.

There are, however, real disadvantages. Parents who work long hours may have limited energy for their children in the evenings, and they may miss important moments in their early development. Some young children, especially babies, can find long days away from home tiring or distressing. Moreover, childcare is expensive in many places, so a large part of the second income may be spent on fees. Where childcare is poor, with too many children for each carer, the experience may do more harm than good.

On balance, I believe the benefits are greater, because financial security and early social learning matter a great deal to a child's future. However, parents can reduce the drawbacks by choosing childcare carefully and protecting family time at weekends and in the evenings, and employers can help by offering flexible working hours.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer gives a clear judgement on whether advantages outweigh disadvantages and supports it in the conclusion. Ideas are developed with specific, everyday examples, and cohesion is achieved through referencing and well-placed linking expressions rather than formulaic phrases.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • childminders

    people paid to look after other people's children in their own home

  • hardship

    a situation in which life is difficult, often because of lack of money

  • sacrificing

    giving up something valuable for another purpose

  • structured activities

    planned tasks organised by an adult

  • daunting

    making someone feel nervous or less confident

  • distressing

    causing worry or unhappiness

  • flexible working hours

    a system that lets employees choose when they start and finish work

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for family.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Both parents working and childcare"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 292 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer gives a clear judgement on whether advantages outweigh disadvantages and supports it in the conclusion. Ideas are developed with specific, everyday examples, and cohesion is achieved through referencing and well-placed linking expressions rather than formulaic phrases.

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