Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Equal parental leave for fathers: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 301 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Fathers should be entitled to the same amount of paid leave as mothers after the birth of a child. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I strongly agree that fathers should have equal paid leave, as it benefits children, gender equality and families.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Equal leave lets fathers bond with babies and share childcare from the start, creating lasting involvement.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    If men take equal leave, employers have less reason to discriminate against young women.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model301 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many countries, mothers receive considerably more paid leave than fathers after the birth of a child. I strongly agree that fathers should be entitled to the same amount of leave, as this would benefit children, support gender equality at work and strengthen families.

The first argument concerns the relationship between fathers and their children. The early months of a child's life are an important period for forming emotional bonds, and fathers who are present during this time are more likely to remain closely involved in their children's upbringing. When a father is entitled to only a few days off, he may return to work while his partner learns to care for the baby alone, and this pattern of unequal responsibility can continue for years. Equal leave allows both parents to develop confidence in tasks such as feeding, bathing and settling the baby.

Secondly, equal leave would reduce discrimination against women in the workplace. At present, some employers may be reluctant to hire or promote young women because they expect them to take long periods of leave. If men were equally likely to take time off, this assumption would weaken, and career breaks would no longer fall mainly on women. Over time, this could help to narrow the differences in pay and seniority that often appear after couples have children.

It could be argued that equal leave would be costly for employers and governments. However, the cost should be seen as an investment in children's development and in a fairer labour market, and many businesses already manage periods of absence through temporary cover.

In conclusion, I believe fathers should have the same right to paid leave as mothers. Doing so would give children the care of both parents, share domestic responsibility more fairly and remove a significant obstacle to women's careers.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the position is clear and developed through two well-explained arguments, followed by a brief rebuttal of a likely objection. Ideas progress logically within each paragraph, and vocabulary such as 'seniority' and 'labour market' is used precisely in context.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • entitled to

    having the right to receive something

  • emotional bonds

    strong feelings of love and connection between people

  • upbringing

    the way a child is cared for and taught while growing up

  • reluctant

    unwilling and slow to do something

  • seniority

    a higher position or rank at work

  • labour market

    the supply of workers and the jobs available to them

  • temporary cover

    a person who does someone's job while they are away

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for family.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Equal parental leave for fathers"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 301 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the position is clear and developed through two well-explained arguments, followed by a brief rebuttal of a likely objection. Ideas progress logically within each paragraph, and vocabulary such as 'seniority' and 'labour market' is used precisely in context.

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