Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

A shared weekly day of rest: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 312 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Shops and businesses should close on one day every week so that everyone can have a shared day of rest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I largely disagree, as compulsory closure would reduce freedom and harm many workers and businesses.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    A shared rest day would free families at the same time and guarantee shop workers a day off.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    People work diverse patterns, small shops rely on weekend income, and multicultural societies observe different days.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model312 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many cities, shops, supermarkets and shopping centres now open every day of the week, sometimes around the clock. Some people would like a return to a weekly day on which most businesses close. Although I understand the appeal of this idea, I largely disagree with it, as it would reduce people's freedom and harm many workers and businesses.

Admittedly, a shared day of rest has some attractive features. When shops are closed, more people are free at the same time, which makes it easier for families and friends to spend time together. Shop workers, who often have to work at weekends, would be guaranteed at least one day off that coincides with those of their relatives. A quieter day each week might also encourage people to spend time outdoors or take part in community activities instead of shopping.

However, the disadvantages would be considerable. Modern societies are highly diverse, and people work very different patterns. A nurse who works long shifts during the week may rely on the weekend to buy groceries, and a compulsory closing day would make life more difficult for such people. Many workers, particularly students, actually prefer weekend shifts because they fit around their studies. In addition, small shops and cafes often earn a large share of their income at weekends, and closing for a whole day could threaten their survival. In multicultural societies, choosing a single day of rest would also be problematic, as different religious communities observe different holy days.

A better approach would be to protect workers' rights directly, for example by guaranteeing that nobody can be forced to work every weekend and that staff receive at least two days off each week.

In conclusion, although a shared day of rest might strengthen family and community life, compulsory closure would restrict choice and harm many people. Protecting employees' time off is a fairer solution.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer concedes the strengths of the opposing view before arguing against it, and proposes a reasoned alternative. Body paragraphs are well developed with realistic examples, and vocabulary such as 'coincides' and 'observe' is used accurately in context.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • appeal

    the quality that makes something attractive

  • coincides

    happens at the same time as something else

  • diverse

    very different from each other

  • compulsory

    required by law or a rule

  • multicultural

    including people of many different cultures

  • observe

    to follow or celebrate a religious custom or day

  • restrict

    to limit something

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for society.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "A shared weekly day of rest"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 312 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer concedes the strengths of the opposing view before arguing against it, and proposes a reasoned alternative. Body paragraphs are well developed with realistic examples, and vocabulary such as 'coincides' and 'observe' is used accurately in context.

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