Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Young people who dream of fame: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 304 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many young people today say that their main ambition is to become famous. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The wish for fame comes from social media and celebrity culture, and it is largely a negative development.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Fame now looks easy to achieve and is linked to wealth, happiness and a sense of worth.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    It can encourage creativity, but it usually leads to disappointment, neglected education and low self-esteem.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model304 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

When asked about their future, a surprising number of young people now say that they simply want to be famous, rather than naming a particular profession. This ambition reflects the influence of social media and celebrity culture, and I believe it is largely a negative development.

The main reason for this trend is that fame appears more achievable than ever before. In the past, becoming well known usually required exceptional talent in acting, music or sport. Today, teenagers see ordinary people gaining huge followings through short videos filmed in their bedrooms, and this makes celebrity seem within anyone's reach. In addition, famous people are constantly shown enjoying luxury holidays, expensive clothes and admiration from fans, so fame becomes associated with wealth and happiness. Young people who feel insecure may also see recognition from strangers as a way of proving their worth.

There are some positive aspects to this ambition. Wanting an audience can motivate young people to develop creative skills, such as editing videos, writing or performing, and a few may build successful careers in the media. However, the disadvantages are more significant. Fame is a goal without a clear path, and since only a tiny number succeed, most will face disappointment. More importantly, when young people value being noticed above developing a skill or contributing to their community, they may neglect their education or take risks to attract attention online. The pursuit of followers can also damage self-esteem, as young people compare themselves with carefully edited images of other people's lives.

In conclusion, the desire for fame among young people is fuelled by social media and the glamorous image of celebrities. Although it can inspire creativity, it is mainly harmful because it encourages unrealistic expectations, so parents and schools should help young people set goals based on skills and purpose rather than attention.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions in turn and giving a clear evaluation that considers a positive side before rejecting it. Ideas progress logically from cause to effect, and the essay shows a wide range of accurate complex structures, including cleft and comparative forms.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • ambition

    a strong wish to achieve something

  • celebrity culture

    a society's strong interest in famous people

  • within anyone's reach

    possible for anybody to achieve

  • insecure

    lacking confidence in oneself

  • pursuit

    the act of trying to get something

  • self-esteem

    the way a person values themselves

  • fuelled

    made stronger or encouraged

  • glamorous

    attractive and exciting in a way linked to wealth

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Young people who dream of fame"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 304 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions in turn and giving a clear evaluation that considers a positive side before rejecting it. Ideas progress logically from cause to effect, and the essay shows a wide range of accurate complex structures, including cleft and comparative forms.

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