Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Celebrity privacy and the press: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 310 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think that newspapers and websites should be free to report on the private lives of famous people, while others believe celebrities have the same right to privacy as anyone else. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Celebrities' privacy should generally be respected unless a story reveals something that genuinely matters to the public.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Supporters of press freedom argue that celebrities use the media for publicity and influence fans, so hypocrisy should be exposed.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Others argue that fame does not mean consent to intrusion, which causes distress to celebrities and their families.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model310 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Stories about the relationships, family problems and personal habits of famous people fill many newspapers and websites. Some argue that the media should be free to publish such stories, whereas others believe that celebrities deserve the same privacy as ordinary citizens. In my view, privacy should generally be respected unless a story reveals something that genuinely matters to the public.

Those who defend press freedom argue that fame comes with a degree of public attention. Many celebrities actively use the media to promote their films, music or brands, and they often share details of their personal lives when it benefits their careers. It therefore seems inconsistent for them to complain when the coverage becomes less flattering. Moreover, famous people influence the behaviour of millions of fans, so revealing hypocrisy, such as a sports star who promotes healthy living while secretly taking illegal drugs, may be in the public interest.

On the other hand, there are strong reasons to protect celebrities' privacy. Being well known for acting or singing does not mean that a person has agreed to have every aspect of their life examined. Photographers who follow famous people to their homes or their children's schools can cause real distress, and constant intrusion may contribute to anxiety and depression. Families of celebrities, who never chose fame, are often harmed as well. In many cases, stories about a famous person's divorce or illness simply satisfy curiosity rather than inform the public about anything important.

I believe the key distinction is between what interests the public and what is in the public interest. The media should be free to report on matters connected to a person's public role or wrongdoing, but not on private relationships or health.

In conclusion, celebrities accept some attention as part of their careers, but they still deserve a private life, and responsible journalism should respect this boundary.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by discussing both views with relevant examples and then resolving them with a clear distinction between public interest and public curiosity. This gives the opinion depth rather than simply choosing a side, and the essay uses a wide range of vocabulary with precision.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • press freedom

    the right of newspapers and media to report without control

  • inconsistent

    not following the same principles each time

  • flattering

    making someone look good

  • hypocrisy

    claiming to have standards that one does not follow

  • public interest

    what benefits society as a whole

  • intrusion

    entering someone's private life when it is not wanted

  • wrongdoing

    illegal or dishonest behaviour

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Celebrity privacy and the press"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 310 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by discussing both views with relevant examples and then resolving them with a clear distinction between public interest and public curiosity. This gives the opinion depth rather than simply choosing a side, and the essay uses a wide range of vocabulary with precision.

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