Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Personalised ads based on browsing data: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 308 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many companies now use information about people's online activity to show them personalised advertisements. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The privacy and manipulation risks of personalised advertising outweigh its convenience.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Users see relevant products, small businesses advertise efficiently and advertising keeps many services free.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Companies collect sensitive personal data and can target people at vulnerable moments.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model308 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

When people browse the internet, the advertisements they see are increasingly chosen on the basis of their search history, location and online purchases. While personalised advertising offers some convenience, I believe its disadvantages, particularly for privacy, outweigh its benefits.

Supporters of this practice point to advantages for both consumers and businesses. Instead of seeing random advertisements, users are shown products related to their interests, so someone who has been searching for running shoes may discover a useful discount. For small businesses with limited budgets, targeted advertising is also much more efficient than a billboard or a newspaper advertisement, as they can reach the customers most likely to buy. Furthermore, advertising revenue allows many websites and apps to offer their services free of charge.

However, the drawbacks are more serious. The main concern is the scale of personal data collection. To target advertisements precisely, companies track what people read, buy and watch, often without users fully understanding what they have agreed to. This information can reveal sensitive details, such as a person's health problems, financial difficulties or political views, and it may be sold to other companies or exposed in data breaches. In addition, personalised advertising can be manipulative. A person searching for loans late at night or someone who has shown interest in gambling may be repeatedly targeted at moments when they are most vulnerable, encouraging decisions they later regret.

The convenience of relevant advertisements is real, but it is a minor benefit compared with the loss of control over personal information. Advertisers could still reach suitable audiences by matching advertisements to the content of a page rather than to the history of the person viewing it.

In conclusion, although targeted advertising helps businesses and keeps many online services free, the threats it poses to privacy and to vulnerable consumers mean that its disadvantages clearly outweigh its advantages.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting both sides with specific illustrations and then explaining why one side carries more weight. The alternative suggested in the fourth paragraph shows well-developed critical thinking, and the vocabulary of data and privacy is precise and appropriate.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • personalised

    designed for one particular person

  • billboard

    a large outdoor board for advertisements

  • data collection

    gathering information about people

  • sensitive details

    private information that could cause harm if shared

  • data breaches

    incidents in which private information is stolen or leaked

  • manipulative

    influencing people in an unfair or dishonest way

  • vulnerable

    easily hurt or influenced

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for media and advertising.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Personalised ads based on browsing data"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 308 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting both sides with specific illustrations and then explaining why one side carries more weight. The alternative suggested in the fourth paragraph shows well-developed critical thinking, and the vocabulary of data and privacy is precise and appropriate.

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