Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Performing traditions for tourists: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 309 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

When traditional customs are performed for tourists, they lose their original meaning and become a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I partly agree: there is a real risk of customs losing meaning, but it is not inevitable and tourism can help preserve them.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Ceremonies may be shortened and dramatised for visitors, and young people may learn the simplified version.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Tourist income gives young people a reason to learn traditional skills, and private ceremonies can continue alongside performances.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model309 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many popular destinations, visitors can watch traditional dances, ceremonies and crafts that have been adapted for a tourist audience. Some argue that this process strips customs of their original significance. While I agree that there is a real risk of this happening, I do not believe it is inevitable, and tourism can sometimes help to preserve traditions.

There is certainly evidence that tourism can change the character of a custom. A ceremony that was once held only on a particular sacred occasion may be shortened and performed several times a day to suit hotel schedules. Costumes may be made more colourful and movements more dramatic to impress visitors who have little knowledge of their meaning. In such cases, the performers may come to see the tradition primarily as a source of income, and younger community members may learn the simplified version rather than the authentic one.

However, tourism can also provide the resources and motivation needed to keep traditions alive. In many rural communities, young people move to cities in search of work, and traditional skills risk disappearing within a generation. When tourists are willing to pay to watch a performance or buy handmade textiles, young people have an economic reason to learn these skills from their elders. Moreover, the performances staged for visitors can exist alongside private ceremonies that the community continues to hold in their original form.

The outcome largely depends on who controls the process. When local communities decide which customs to share and how to present them, they can protect what is sacred while benefiting from visitors' interest. Problems are more likely when outside tour operators package culture purely for profit.

In conclusion, I partly agree with the statement. Performing customs for tourists can reduce them to entertainment, but when communities remain in control, tourism can help sustain traditions that might otherwise be lost.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting a partial agreement whose limits are explained and supported on both sides. The fourth paragraph adds an insightful condition that develops the position, and the vocabulary, including 'inevitable' and 'authentic', is precise and well chosen.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • strips

    removes something important from something

  • significance

    importance or meaning

  • inevitable

    certain to happen

  • sacred

    connected with religion and deserving deep respect

  • authentic

    real and original, not a copy

  • staged

    organised and performed for an audience

  • sustain

    to keep something going over time

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for culture and tradition.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Performing traditions for tourists"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 309 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting a partial agreement whose limits are explained and supported on both sides. The fourth paragraph adds an insightful condition that develops the position, and the vocabulary, including 'inevitable' and 'authentic', is precise and well chosen.

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