Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Closure of local theatres and music venues: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 289 words
  • Problem and solution
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many towns, local theatres and live music venues are closing because fewer people attend them. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The decline is linked to changing entertainment habits and rising costs, but councils, venues and residents can reverse it.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Streaming keeps people at home, rising costs push up ticket prices, and poor evening transport makes trips inconvenient.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Rent relief, broader programmes, school visits and discounted tickets would attract and keep audiences.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model289 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Across many towns, small theatres and live music venues that once played a central role in community life are closing down. This trend has several causes, mostly connected with changing entertainment habits and rising costs, but local authorities, venues and residents can all help to reverse it.

The most obvious cause is the growth of home entertainment. With streaming services offering thousands of films, series and concerts for a monthly fee, many people prefer to stay at home rather than travel to a venue and pay for a ticket. A second cause is cost. Venues face rising rents, energy bills and staff wages, and they must often increase ticket prices to survive, which in turn discourages audiences, particularly families and young people. Finally, in some towns, venues are located in areas that are poorly served by public transport in the evening, making a night out inconvenient for those without a car.

Several solutions could help. Local councils could offer reduced rents or tax relief to cultural venues, recognising that they bring visitors into town centres who also spend money in restaurants and shops. Venues themselves could broaden their programmes by hosting comedy nights, workshops for children or community events, which attract new audiences and make better use of the building during the day. Schools could also organise regular visits to local theatres so that young people develop a habit of attending live performances. In addition, discounted tickets for students and residents would make attendance more affordable.

In conclusion, local theatres and music venues are struggling mainly because of competition from home entertainment and rising costs. With practical support from councils, more varied programmes and efforts to attract young audiences, these venues could remain a valuable part of community life.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the causes are clearly explained and each solution is linked to who could carry it out, as the question requires. Paragraphing is logical, and the writer uses accurate collocations such as 'poorly served by public transport' and 'broaden their programmes'.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • reverse

    to change something back to how it was

  • discourages

    makes someone less likely to do something

  • inconvenient

    causing difficulty or extra effort

  • relief

    a reduction in the amount of tax or money owed

  • broaden

    to make something include more things

  • programmes

    planned series of events or performances

  • affordable

    cheap enough for people to pay for

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for culture and tradition.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Closure of local theatres and music venues"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 289 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the causes are clearly explained and each solution is linked to who could carry it out, as the question requires. Paragraphing is logical, and the writer uses accurate collocations such as 'poorly served by public transport' and 'broaden their programmes'.

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