Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Performance bonuses versus equal pay: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 297 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think that employees should receive bonuses based on their individual performance, while others believe that everyone doing the same job should be paid the same. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Equal basic pay is fairer, but team-based rewards offer a sensible compromise.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Individual bonuses motivate staff, reward top contributors and help employers keep productive workers.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Performance is hard to measure, narrow targets distort effort, and bonuses can damage teamwork.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model297 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

How employees should be rewarded is an important question for any organisation. Some believe that individual bonuses encourage people to work harder, whereas others prefer equal pay for everyone in the same role. In my view, equal basic pay is fairer, but team-based rewards can offer a sensible compromise.

Supporters of performance bonuses argue that they motivate employees and reward those who contribute most. If a salesperson who brings in twice as many customers as a colleague receives exactly the same income, they may feel undervalued and eventually leave for a competitor. Bonuses linked to clear targets give staff a reason to make extra effort and help employers retain their most productive workers. Many people also feel instinctively that it is fair for greater effort to bring greater reward.

However, others point out that individual bonuses can create problems. In many jobs, performance is difficult to measure accurately; a nurse or a teacher contributes in ways that cannot easily be reduced to numbers. When bonuses depend on narrow targets, employees may focus only on what is measured and neglect other important duties. Bonuses can also damage teamwork, because colleagues may compete with each other or refuse to share useful information. Equal pay, by contrast, avoids resentment and makes it clear that every member of a team is valued.

I believe that people doing the same job should receive the same basic salary, as this promotes cooperation and avoids arguments about how performance is judged. At the same time, rewarding a whole team or department for meeting shared goals would encourage effort without setting colleagues against one another.

In conclusion, although individual bonuses can motivate high performers, they often prove difficult to apply fairly. Equal basic pay combined with team rewards seems to me the most balanced approach.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining each view fairly and proposing a reasoned compromise as the writer's own opinion. Ideas progress logically, and vocabulary such as 'resentment' and 'instinctively' adds precision, while sentence structures are varied and controlled.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • undervalued

    not given the recognition or pay deserved

  • retain

    to keep someone or something

  • instinctively

    in a way based on natural feeling rather than thought

  • neglect

    to fail to give enough attention to something

  • resentment

    a feeling of anger about unfair treatment

  • cooperation

    working together towards a shared aim

  • compromise

    a solution that combines parts of different positions

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for work and careers.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Performance bonuses versus equal pay"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 297 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining each view fairly and proposing a reasoned compromise as the writer's own opinion. Ideas progress logically, and vocabulary such as 'resentment' and 'instinctively' adds precision, while sentence structures are varied and controlled.

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