Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Paying for private after-school tutors: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 292 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many parents now pay for private tutors to give their children extra lessons outside school hours. Why do parents do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Parents turn to tutors for several reasons, and although tutoring can help, its widespread use is largely negative.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Parents use tutors because of exam competition, large classes and limited time to help with homework themselves.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Tutoring helps individual children but, as a norm, harms wellbeing, widens inequality and hides weak teaching.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model292 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Private tutoring has grown into a large industry, with many children attending extra lessons in the evenings and at weekends. Parents choose this option for a variety of reasons, and although tutoring can be helpful, I believe that its widespread use is a largely negative development.

The main reason parents employ tutors is competition. In education systems where entry to selective schools or prestigious universities depends on examination results, parents fear that their child will fall behind classmates who are receiving extra help. Some parents also feel that teachers in large classes cannot give their child enough individual attention. A pupil who has misunderstood a basic concept in algebra, for instance, may never have the chance to ask questions in a class of forty, whereas a tutor can address the problem directly. Finally, busy working parents may lack the time or confidence to help with homework themselves.

There are certainly benefits in individual cases. A struggling child can regain confidence with patient one-to-one support, and a tutor may help a student prepare for a specific test. However, when tutoring becomes the norm, its effects are more troubling. Children who spend their evenings in further lessons have little time for rest, sport or hobbies, which are important for their wellbeing. In addition, because tutoring is expensive, it gives a further advantage to wealthier families and widens the gap in achievement between rich and poor pupils. It may even reduce pressure on schools to improve, since weaknesses in teaching are quietly compensated for at home.

In conclusion, parents turn to tutors because of intense academic competition and concerns about large classes. Although occasional tutoring can be valuable, its growing prevalence harms children's wellbeing and deepens inequality, so I regard the trend as mainly negative.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions in turn and giving a clear, qualified judgement on the second. Ideas are logically organised, with a specific example supporting the causes, and the writer uses less common items such as 'prevalence' and 'compensated for' accurately.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • selective

    choosing pupils according to ability or exam results

  • prestigious

    highly respected

  • one-to-one

    involving one teacher and one learner

  • norm

    something that is usual or expected

  • wellbeing

    the state of being healthy and happy

  • compensated

    made up for a weakness or loss

  • prevalence

    how common or widespread something is

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for education.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Paying for private after-school tutors"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 292 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions in turn and giving a clear, qualified judgement on the second. Ideas are logically organised, with a specific example supporting the causes, and the writer uses less common items such as 'prevalence' and 'compensated for' accurately.

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