Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Buying more than we need: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 295 words
  • Two-part question
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many countries, people buy far more goods than they actually need. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development for society?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    People overbuy because of marketing, cheap goods and the link between possessions and status, and I believe this is mainly negative for society.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Targeted advertising, low prices and easy online ordering, plus the idea that possessions show success, drive excess buying.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Although spending supports jobs, overconsumption causes debt, waste and stress, so its overall effect is negative.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model295 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Homes in wealthy countries are often filled with clothes that are rarely worn, gadgets that are seldom used and food that is thrown away. This essay will consider why people buy more than they need and argue that the trend is, on balance, harmful to society.

Several factors encourage excessive buying. Firstly, marketing has become extremely sophisticated. Online platforms track what people look at and show them targeted advertisements, while special offers such as "buy one, get one free" persuade shoppers to take more than they intended. Secondly, mass production has made many goods cheap, so people can replace items easily rather than repair them. Online shopping adds further convenience, as a product can be ordered with a single click and delivered the next day. Finally, possessions are often seen as a sign of success. Many people feel that a larger home, a newer car or designer clothing shows others that they are doing well.

Some people argue that high spending is positive because it keeps shops open and supports jobs in manufacturing and retail. While this is true to some extent, I believe the disadvantages are greater. Buying unnecessary goods leads many households into debt, causing stress and limiting their ability to save for the future. It also creates enormous amounts of waste, as unwanted items end up in landfill and the resources used to make them are lost. Furthermore, there is little evidence that owning more makes people happier; the pleasure of a new purchase usually fades quickly, leaving people wanting the next one.

In conclusion, people overbuy because of persuasive marketing, cheap goods and the link between possessions and status. Although consumer spending supports the economy, I consider this trend mainly negative, as it harms people's finances, the environment and their wellbeing.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions clearly and acknowledging the economic counter-argument before explaining the writer's view. Each paragraph has a strong central idea supported by relevant examples. Lexical resource is varied and accurate, including phrases such as "on balance" and "targeted advertisements".

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • excessive

    more than is necessary or reasonable

  • targeted advertisements

    adverts shown to people based on their interests or behaviour

  • mass production

    making large numbers of goods in factories

  • possessions

    things that a person owns

  • status

    a person's position or importance in society

  • on balance

    after considering all the facts

  • wellbeing

    the state of being healthy and happy

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for economy and money.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Buying more than we need"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 295 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions clearly and acknowledging the economic counter-argument before explaining the writer's view. Each paragraph has a strong central idea supported by relevant examples. Lexical resource is varied and accurate, including phrases such as "on balance" and "targeted advertisements".

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