Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Equal funding for mental and physical health: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 306 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Mental health problems should receive the same level of funding and attention as physical illnesses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I completely agree that mental health should receive equal funding and attention.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Mental illness causes suffering as real as physical illness, so treating it as less deserving is unfair.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Neglecting mental health is costly for society, and early support reduces wider costs.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model306 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

For a long time, health systems have treated mental illness as less serious than physical disease, often providing fewer services and longer waits. I completely agree that mental health problems should receive the same level of funding and attention as physical illnesses.

The main reason is that mental illness causes suffering that is just as real as physical illness. Severe depression or anxiety can make it impossible for a person to work, study or maintain relationships, and in the worst cases it can be life-threatening. Nobody would accept a patient with a broken leg being told to wait months for treatment, yet people with serious mental health conditions are frequently asked to do exactly that. Treating one kind of suffering as less deserving of care than another is neither logical nor fair.

Secondly, neglecting mental health is costly for society. When people do not receive timely treatment, their conditions often worsen, leading to long periods off work, family breakdown and sometimes homelessness. Mental and physical health are also closely connected, since people with long-term depression may find it harder to look after their diet, exercise or medication for other conditions. Investing in early support, such as counselling services in schools and workplaces, can therefore reduce the wider costs that arise when problems become severe.

Some people argue that physical illnesses are easier to diagnose and that their treatments have more predictable results, so funding them is a safer use of public money. However, talking therapies and medication already help many patients, and the difficulty of measuring mental illness is a reason to invest in research rather than to neglect it.

In conclusion, mental illness affects people's lives as seriously as physical disease and creates significant social and economic costs. Health systems should therefore give it equal funding and attention, so that every patient receives timely care.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by holding a clear position throughout and supporting it with a moral argument and a practical, economic one. The comparison with a broken leg makes the point vivid without exaggeration, and the counter-argument is answered precisely, showing strong control of argument and cohesion.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • life-threatening

    serious enough to cause death

  • deserving

    worthy of help or support

  • neglecting

    failing to give enough care or attention to

  • timely

    happening at the right or useful time

  • family breakdown

    the failure of family relationships, often ending in separation

  • diagnose

    to identify an illness from its signs

  • talking therapies

    treatments based on discussing problems with a trained professional

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Equal funding for mental and physical health"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 306 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by holding a clear position throughout and supporting it with a moral argument and a practical, economic one. The comparison with a broken leg makes the point vivid without exaggeration, and the counter-argument is answered precisely, showing strong control of argument and cohesion.

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