Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Compulsory health education in schools: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 304 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Health education, including nutrition, exercise and mental well-being, should be a compulsory subject in all schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I strongly agree that health should be a compulsory school subject because childhood habits last a lifetime.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Many children learn little about nutrition and exercise at home, and lessons would reach every child.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Teaching mental well-being helps teenagers recognise stress, support friends and seek help early.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model304 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Schools traditionally focus on academic subjects such as mathematics, languages and science, but some people argue that health education deserves an equally important place. I strongly agree that all schools should teach health as a compulsory subject, since the habits formed in childhood shape well-being for life.

The first reason is that many young people do not learn about health anywhere else. Parents may be too busy to cook healthy meals or may not understand nutrition themselves, and children are surrounded by advertisements for snacks and fizzy drinks. A regular class could teach pupils how to read food labels, plan a balanced meal and understand why physical activity matters. For instance, a lesson in which students compare the sugar content of common breakfast cereals can change the choices they make at home. Because these lessons would reach every child, they would also narrow the gap between families with good knowledge of health and those without it.

Secondly, mental well-being is now a serious concern among teenagers, who face pressure from exams and social media. Health education could teach students how to recognise stress and anxiety, how to support friends who are struggling and where to seek help. Learning these skills early may prevent minor difficulties from developing into serious problems and reduce the stigma that stops many young people from talking about their feelings.

Some argue that the timetable is already full and that adding another subject would take time away from core academic study. However, healthy and emotionally stable students tend to concentrate better and learn more effectively, so health education supports academic success rather than competing with it.

In conclusion, making health education compulsory would give every child the knowledge to look after both body and mind. Its benefits for individuals, families and society justify a permanent place in the school curriculum.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by maintaining a strong position throughout and supporting it with two clearly separated reasons, one about physical and one about mental health. The counter-argument is answered convincingly, and expressions such as "narrow the gap" and "reduce the stigma" show natural, precise collocation.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • compulsory

    required by a rule

  • food labels

    information printed on packaging about what food contains

  • balanced meal

    a meal with the right mix of different foods

  • narrow the gap

    reduce the difference between two groups

  • stigma

    shame or disapproval linked to something

  • core

    most important or central

  • curriculum

    the subjects taught in a school

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Compulsory health education in schools"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 304 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by maintaining a strong position throughout and supporting it with two clearly separated reasons, one about physical and one about mental health. The counter-argument is answered convincingly, and expressions such as "narrow the gap" and "reduce the stigma" show natural, precise collocation.

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