Is genetic engineering a threat to human existence?
The question
To what extent do you agree that genetic engineering constitutes a threat to humanity?
About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.
Plan before you write
- Position:
- While genetic engineering offers significant medical breakthroughs, it poses an existential risk if left unregulated due to unforeseen biological consequences.
- Paragraph 2:
- The primary benefit of genetic engineering lies in its capacity to eradicate hereditary diseases and improve human longevity.
- Paragraph 3:
- The danger stems from the potential for irreversible ecological disruption and the emergence of uncontrollable bio-engineered pathogens.
- State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
- Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
- A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.
Band 8 sample essay
The rapid advancement of genetic engineering has ignited a fierce debate regarding its potential impact on our species. Some argue that this technology is a revolutionary tool for human progress, while others maintain it presents a catastrophic hazard. In my view, while genetic engineering offers significant medical breakthroughs, it poses an existential risk if left unregulated due to unforeseen biological consequences.
The primary benefit of genetic engineering lies in its capacity to eradicate hereditary diseases and improve human longevity. By precisely editing the genome, scientists can potentially eliminate debilitating conditions such as cystic fibrosis or Huntington’s disease before they manifest. For instance, the development of CRISPR technology has already shown promise in treating sickle cell anaemia, offering a permanent cure rather than lifelong symptom management. This capability to refine human health at a molecular level signifies a monumental shift in our ability to combat suffering.
Conversely, the danger stems from the potential for irreversible ecological disruption and the emergence of uncontrollable bio-engineered pathogens. Altering the fundamental building blocks of life carries risks that are difficult to predict, as complex ecosystems may react unpredictably to modified organisms. A specific example is the fear surrounding 'gene drives', which could be used to wipe out entire species of disease-carrying insects but might inadvertently collapse food chains. If such technology were to escape a laboratory setting, the resulting environmental instability could threaten the very foundations of human survival.
Ultimately, genetic engineering is a powerful innovation that necessitates extreme caution. While the medical advantages are undeniable, the unpredictable nature of manipulating life at its core makes it a substantial threat if oversight is insufficient. Humanity must prioritise stringent international regulations to ensure that these scientific advancements do not compromise our long-term safety.
287 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.
Why this scores Band 8
This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a consistent, sophisticated argument that directly addresses the 'extent' of the threat with clear, academic reasoning. A Band 6 answer often fails to provide specific examples or drifts into vague, repetitive generalizations without linking the technology's risks to concrete biological consequences.
Vocabulary from the essay
- hereditary
- passed from parents to offspring through genes
- manifest
- to become clear or appear as a symptom
- molecular
- relating to the smallest unit of chemical substances
- irreversible
- impossible to change back to a previous state
- pathogens
- microorganisms that can cause various human diseases
- oversight
- the action of providing supervision or careful management
- debilitating
- causing someone to become very weak or infirm
- unpredictable
- impossible to know what will happen in future
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Frequently asked questions
What type of essay is "Is genetic engineering a threat to human existence?"?
Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
How long should the answer be?
At least 250 words. This sample is 287 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.
What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?
This essay achieves Band 8 by maintaining a consistent, sophisticated argument that directly addresses the 'extent' of the threat with clear, academic reasoning. A Band 6 answer often fails to provide specific examples or drifts into vague, repetitive generalizations without linking the technology's risks to concrete biological consequences.
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