Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Comparison of worker distribution across three economic sectors in four countries

The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of workers in three sectors: 1980 (%)
020406080100GermanyUSAJapanChina
  • Agriculture
  • Industry
  • Services
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GermanyUSAJapanChina
Agriculture591170
Industry60515040
Services50493950
Percentage of workers in three sectors: 2010 (%)
020406080100GermanyUSAJapanChina
  • Agriculture
  • Industry
  • Services
View the data
GermanyUSAJapanChina
Agriculture26950
Industry82707940
Services41393022

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar charts illustrate the distribution of the workforce across the agricultural, industrial, and service sectors in Germany, the USA, Japan, and China during 1980 and 2010. Overall, it is evident that while the industrial sector grew significantly in the three developed nations, China saw a substantial decline in agricultural employment, though it remained the primary sector there.

In 1980, China had the highest proportion of agricultural workers at 70%, compared to only 5% in Germany. By 2010, this figure in China had dropped to 50%, whereas the other three countries saw agricultural employment fall to below 10%. Conversely, the industrial sector saw marked growth in the developed nations. Germany’s industrial workforce rose from 60% in 1980 to 82% in 2010, while Japan experienced a similar increase from 50% to 79%. The USA also saw its industrial sector expand from 51% to 70%.

Regarding the service sector, all four countries showed a downward trend between 1980 and 2010. Germany’s service sector fell from 50% to 41%, and the USA saw a decline from 49% to 39%. Japan and China also experienced decreases, with Japan dropping to 30% and China to 22% by 2010.

193 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

proportion
a part, share, or number considered in comparative relation
marked
clearly noticeable or evident in a significant way
conversely
introducing a statement that reverses a previous one
substantial
of considerable importance, size, or worth
distribution
the way in which something is shared among people
decline
a gradual and continuous loss of strength or number

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Overall, the industrial sector became the dominant employer in Germany, the USA, and Japan by 2010, while China experienced a significant shift away from agriculture.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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