Imprisonment rates across five different nations from 1930 to 1980
The chart below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
- Great Britain
- Australia
- New Zealand
- United States
- Canada
View the data
| 1930 | 1940 | 1950 | 1960 | 1970 | 1980 | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Great Britain | 30 | 30 | 40 | 50 | 67 | 85 |
| Australia | 70 | 50 | 45 | 60 | 67 | 50 |
| New Zealand | 100 | 55 | 50 | 65 | 95 | 87 |
| United States | 100 | 130 | 105 | 117 | 85 | 135 |
| Canada | 120 | 110 | 115 | 100 | 85 | 90 |
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Band 8 sample answer
The bar chart illustrates the number of prisoners in five countries—Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the United States, and Canada—between 1930 and 1980.
Overall, the United States experienced the most significant fluctuations in imprisonment figures, while Great Britain showed a consistent upward trend throughout the period. By the end of the period, the United States recorded the highest number of prisoners, whereas Australia saw the lowest.
In 1930, Canada had the highest imprisonment rate at 120, followed by the United States and New Zealand at 100 each. Great Britain started with the lowest figure of 30. By 1950, the figures for most countries had declined or remained relatively stable, with the United States at 105 and Canada at 115. Conversely, Great Britain’s figures began a steady climb, rising from 30 in 1940 to 50 by 1960.
By 1980, the United States reached a peak of 135, having recovered from a dip to 85 in 1970. Great Britain continued its upward trajectory, reaching 85. Meanwhile, Australia’s figures fluctuated, dropping to 50 by 1980, while New Zealand’s figures rose to 87. Canada’s imprisonment numbers remained relatively high, finishing at 90 in 1980 after a low of 85 in 1970.
197 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.
How to write about bar charts
- Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
- If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
- Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
- fluctuations
- irregular rising and falling in number or amount
- upward trend
- a general movement or direction towards higher levels
- trajectory
- the path followed by a development or trend
- peak
- the highest point reached by a value
- stable
- not likely to change or fail suddenly
- recovered
- returned to a normal or higher state
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What should the overview say?
Overall, the United States experienced the most significant fluctuations in imprisonment figures, while Great Britain showed a consistent upward trend throughout the period.
How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?
At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
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Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
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