Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of male and female teachers in six UK educational settings in 2010

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of male and female teachers in six educational settings in the UK (2010) (%)
020406080100Nursery/ Pre-schoolPrimary schoolSecondary schoolCollegePrivate training instit…University
  • Men
  • Women
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Nursery/ Pre-schoolPrimary schoolSecondary schoolCollegePrivate training instituteUniversity
Men51044505770
Women959156504330

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of teachers across six distinct educational settings in the UK during 2010. Overall, it is evident that there is a stark contrast in gender representation depending on the level of education, with women significantly outnumbering men in early years and primary schooling, while the reverse is true for university and private training environments.

In nursery and pre-school settings, women accounted for 95% of the teaching staff, leaving men with a mere 5%. A similar pattern was observed in primary schools, where women comprised 91% of teachers compared to only 10% for men. The gender gap narrowed considerably in secondary schools, where women made up 56% and men 44%. By the college level, the distribution was perfectly balanced, with both genders representing 50% of the workforce.

Conversely, the trend shifted in favour of men in more advanced settings. In private training institutes, 57% of teachers were male, while 43% were female. This disparity was most pronounced at the university level, where men occupied 70% of teaching roles, leaving women with 30%, which is the inverse of the proportions seen in primary education.

188 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

stark contrast
a very clear and obvious difference between things
outnumbering
being more numerous than the other group mentioned
narrowed
became smaller in range or difference between values
pronounced
very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked in character
inverse
the exact opposite or reverse of a position
distribution
the way in which something is shared among people

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Women dominated the teaching workforce in early childhood and primary education, whereas men held the majority of positions in higher education and private training sectors.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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