Academic Writing Task 1 · line graph

Percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries from 1962 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012 (%)
020406080100196219701980199020002012
  • Service
  • Manufacturing
  • Agriculture
  • Construction
  • Mining
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196219701980199020002012
Service525763707678
Manufacturing252520242210
Agriculture1198544
Construction9999910
Mining122222

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Band 8 sample answer

The line graph illustrates the shifts in the percentage of the Australian workforce across five distinct industries between 1962 and 2012. Overall, it is clear that the service industry became the dominant employer, while the manufacturing and agricultural sectors saw their shares of the workforce diminish over the fifty-year period.

In 1962, the service industry accounted for 52% of the workforce, a figure that climbed steadily to reach 78% by 2012. Conversely, manufacturing began at 25% in 1962, fluctuated slightly throughout the decades, and then plummeted to 10% by the end of the period. Agriculture followed a similar downward trajectory, starting at 11% and gradually decreasing to a low of 4% by 2012.

In contrast, the construction and mining sectors remained relatively stable. Construction maintained a consistent share of the workforce, hovering around 9% for most of the period before rising slightly to 10% in 2012. Mining represented the smallest proportion of the workforce throughout the entire timeframe, starting at 1% in 1962 and remaining stagnant at approximately 2% from 1970 onwards. By 2012, the service industry had become the primary employer, dwarfing the combined percentages of the other four sectors.

191 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about line graphs

plummeted
fell sharply and suddenly to a lower level
downward trajectory
a path or trend that is moving downwards
stagnant
showing no activity or change in value
dwarfing
making something appear very small by comparison
fluctuated
rose and fell irregularly in number or amount
proportion
a part or share in relation to whole

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The service sector experienced significant growth over the period, while manufacturing and agriculture saw overall declines in their workforce proportions.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe line graphs?

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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