Stock price performance of four major technology companies from 2011 to 2016
The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
- Apple
- Yahoo
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| 2011 | 2012 | 2013 | 2014 | 2015 | 2016 | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 7,500 | 10,000 | 13,000 | 15,000 | 18,000 | 20,000 | |
| 500 | 500 | 500 | 500 | 500 | 500 | |
| Apple | 4,500 | 34,000 | 6,500 | 12,000 | 3,000 | 5,500 |
| Yahoo | 7,500 | 6,500 | 5,500 | 3,000 | 3,000 | 2,000 |
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Band 8 sample answer
The bar chart illustrates the fluctuations in the stock prices of four technology giants—Facebook, Google, Apple, and Yahoo—over a six-year period from 2011 to 2016.
Overall, Facebook demonstrated a steady and significant growth in its stock value, while Apple’s performance was characterised by extreme volatility, most notably a sharp spike in 2012. In contrast, Google remained remarkably stable, and Yahoo experienced a persistent decline.
Facebook’s stock price began at 7,500 in 2011 and climbed steadily each year, reaching 20,000 by 2016. Conversely, Apple’s stock price surged to a massive peak of 34,000 in 2012, up from 4,500 the previous year. However, this was followed by a sharp drop to 6,500 in 2013, with further fluctuations leading to a value of 5,500 by the end of the period.
Yahoo started at 7,500 in 2011, matching Facebook, but its value trended downwards consistently, falling to 2,000 by 2016. Google maintained the lowest and most consistent stock price among the four companies, remaining flat at 500 throughout the entire six-year duration, showing no variation despite the market changes affecting its competitors.
178 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.
How to write about bar charts
- Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
- If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
- Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
- fluctuations
- irregular rising and falling in number or amount
- volatility
- liability to change rapidly and unpredictably for worse
- surged
- increased suddenly and powerfully to a high level
- downwards
- moving or pointing towards a lower level
- consistently
- acting or done in the same way over time
- competitors
- organizations that provide similar products or services
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Frequently asked questions
What should the overview say?
Facebook experienced a consistent upward trend throughout the period, whereas Apple's stock price was highly volatile, peaking dramatically in 2012.
How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?
At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
How do I describe bar charts?
Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
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