Academic Writing Task 1 · process diagram

The evolutionary development of the horse over forty million years

The diagram below shows the development of the horse over 40 million years. The evolution of the horse, with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Evolution of the horse over 40 million years
  1. 1.Eohippus (40 million years ago): small body with multi-toed foot structure
  2. 2.Mesohippus (30 million years ago): larger body with reduced toe structure
  3. 3.Merychippus (15 million years ago): further increased size with prominent central toe
  4. 4.Modern Horse (modern): largest body size with a single hoof structure

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Band 8 sample answer

The provided diagram illustrates the evolutionary progression of the horse over a period of 40 million years, with a specific focus on the transformation of its body size and foot anatomy.

Overall, it is evident that the horse has experienced a substantial increase in physical stature alongside a marked simplification of its foot structure, moving from a multi-toed form to a single-hoofed limb.

Starting 40 million years ago, the Eohippus was relatively small and possessed a foot with multiple distinct toes. By 30 million years ago, the Mesohippus had emerged, showing a larger body size and a more consolidated foot structure where the toes were less pronounced. This trend continued into the Merychippus stage, 15 million years ago, which featured a further increase in size and a foot dominated by a single, central toe, with the side toes becoming significantly reduced.

In the modern era, the horse has reached its largest physical size. The foot structure has fully evolved into a single, solid hoof, representing the final stage of the reduction process that began millions of years earlier. This transition reflects a clear adaptation towards greater efficiency in movement over time.

191 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about process diagrams

progression
a movement or development towards a more advanced state
stature
the natural height of a person or animal
consolidated
combined into a single, more effective or coherent whole
dominated
having a commanding influence on or being the main feature
adaptation
the process of changing to become better suited to environments
marked
clearly noticeable or evident in a significant way

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The diagram illustrates that the horse has undergone significant physical growth and a progressive reduction in the number of toes on its feet over the past 40 million years.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe process diagrams?

Say how many stages there are and where the process starts and ends. Use the passive and sequencers: first, after this, once, finally. Keep every stage; a missing step costs task achievement.

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