Academic Writing Task 1 · process diagram

The Industrial Process Involved in the Production of Soft Cheese

The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

  1. 1.Mixing water and milk
  2. 2.Cooling at 5°C for 2 hours
  3. 3.Adding salt
  4. 4.Fermentation at 35°C for 2 hours
  5. 5.Evaporation at 100°C for 8 hours
  6. 6.Cooling at 5°C for 8 hours
  7. 7.Filtering to separate soft cheese and waste water

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Band 8 sample answer

The provided diagram illustrates the various stages involved in the manufacturing of soft cheese, starting from the initial mixing of raw ingredients to the final filtration of the product.

Overall, the process is characterised by a sequence of temperature-controlled treatments, including mixing, fermentation, evaporation, and cooling, which transform liquid ingredients into a solid food product.

The procedure begins with the mixing of water and milk, which is immediately followed by a cooling phase at 5°C for a duration of two hours. Once cooled, salt is added to the mixture before it undergoes fermentation at 35°C for another two hours. This step is essential for preparing the mixture for the subsequent thermal treatment.

Following fermentation, the mixture is subjected to evaporation at 100°C for eight hours, a stage that involves the release of steam. Finally, the product undergoes a second cooling phase, also maintained at 5°C for eight hours. The process concludes with a filtration stage, which separates the final soft cheese product from the remaining waste water. Throughout the cycle, the consistency of the mixture changes from a liquid state to a thicker substance, ultimately resulting in the finished cheese.

190 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about process diagrams

characterised by
having a particular feature or quality as typical
subsequent
coming after something in time or order
duration
the length of time something continues to exist
subjected to
to be forced to experience a specific process
concludes
to bring something to an end or finish
alternates
to occur in turns or switch between states

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

The production of soft cheese is a multi-stage process that alternates between heating and cooling phases while incorporating specific ingredients and filtration steps.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe process diagrams?

Say how many stages there are and where the process starts and ends. Use the passive and sequencers: first, after this, once, finally. Keep every stage; a missing step costs task achievement.

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