Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Unemployment and emigration in Ireland in three selected years: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 183 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The charts show approximate unemployment rates and numbers of people leaving Ireland in three selected years: 1988, 2000 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Unemployment rate % (%)
048121620198820002008

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Rounded estimates for three selected years read from the practice source. The bars do not show annual changes between these dates.

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198820002008
Unemployment rate %1749
People leaving (people)
010,00020,00030,00040,00050,000198820002008

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Rounded estimates for three selected years read from the practice source. The bars do not show annual changes between these dates.

View the data
198820002008
People leaving40,00025,00045,000

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8183 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The two bar charts compare approximate unemployment rates in Ireland with the numbers of people leaving the country in 1988, 2000 and 2008. Unemployment is measured as a percentage, whereas emigration is expressed as a number of people.

Overall, both indicators were lower in 2000 than at the beginning of the comparison, before rising again by 2008. However, the final unemployment rate remained below its initial level, while the number of emigrants finished slightly higher.

In 1988, unemployment stood at about 17%. By 2000, it had fallen to approximately 4%, the lowest of the three readings shown. The rate then rose to around 9% in 2008. This was more than twice the 2000 figure, although it was still considerably below the level recorded in 1988.

The number of people leaving Ireland followed a similar pattern across the selected years. Approximately 40,000 people emigrated in 1988, compared with around 25,000 in 2000. By 2008, the figure had increased to roughly 45,000, exceeding the initial reading by about 5,000. These selected points show changes between the dates, rather than the pattern in every intervening year.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • indicators

    measures that show a particular situation or trend

  • initial

    at the beginning of the period being described

  • approximately

    close to the stated amount but not exact

  • exceeding

    being greater than the amount used for comparison

  • intervening

    occurring between the two dates being compared

  • considerably

    by a large or clearly noticeable amount

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Both measures were lower in 2000 than in 1988 and rose again by 2008. Unemployment ended below its initial level, while emigration finished slightly higher.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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